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apsaraqueen

shaken in my faith: master of illusion - part five

Jun 17, 2011 18:12

between graduating from school (forever! i think?) and studying for the bar exam, i've reread this so many times i have no idea what it even says anymore -_- i hope it is readable nonetheless! apologies for the delay and the obnoxious length, too.

also, this chapter lands us solidly in nc-17 territory, so you should probably avoid if you're not ( Read more... )

rei, fic!, jadeite, shaken in my faith

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senshifan June 15 2011, 08:45:47 UTC

This was amazing as usual. I love that the tension between Jedite and Mars was finally relieved. It's believable that they would react as they did given the circumstances and the situation.

I think I've fallen in love with your epic, partially because it's my favorite pairing, and partially because it's so well written. You had no need to be nervous about posting because it's great.

apsaraqueen June 15 2011, 21:57:57 UTC

thank you for the kind words! i was definitely nervous since it's been a while since i wrote anything for this story, and i wasn't sure if the pacing in my head still worked. so glad you found it believable and that you're still liking it! :)

charliechaplin2 June 15 2011, 15:02:13 UTC

OMG OMG OMG OMG, I need to read this so badly!! I'm so sorry I haven't had the chance to yet, but I'm so excited! I'm going to be all over this like Pooh Bear on honey as soon as I can.

As a side note, Yay!!! Congratulations on finally graduating!!!!!!! ^_____________________________^

How's studying going?!

charliechaplin2 June 15 2011, 18:18:36 UTC

Hmm, how else can I say this?

OH MY GIDDY AUNT MERTHYR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THE SEX!

THE TALKING!!!

THE TRYING TO BE TOGETHER WITHOUT THE FIGHTING!!!

THE SEX!!!

THE GOING HOME AND IMMINENT SENSE OF DOOOOM!!!!!!!!!

THE TSUNAMI METAPHOR!!!!

NEPHRITE BEING HILARIOUS!!

CONSTANT ENDY/KUNZ GAY JOKES (WHICH MAY NOT BE JOKES)

DID I MENTION THE SEX????

THIS IS BRILLIANT!!

apsaraqueen June 15 2011, 21:56:46 UTC

:DDD I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKE THIS.

THE TRYING TO BE TOGETHER WITHOUT THE FIGHTING!!!

oh god. what else, right? dysfunctional to the effing max.

THE SEX!!!

but dysfunctional forbidden sex is so much hotter than the other kind!

CONSTANT ENDY/KUNZ GAY JOKES (WHICH MAY NOT BE JOKES)

key word here is "may" :D

i am so, so, so happy you're enjoying this! hopefully more soon, my brain is a little burned out right now, but i'll do what i can!

lovelylytton September 4 2011, 19:43:50 UTC

“No, Jadeite,” she replies. “You are left alone with me.”
You know, their flirting is like playing this game where you put your hand on a table, outstretch your fingers, and then, with the other hand, make a knife hit the table between the fingers, getting faster and faster as you go. Their flirtation is so... dangerous. There is such a sense of doom clinging to their every conversation, and if Jadeite were half as clever as the thinks himself to be, he would pack up and run the fuck away because this cannot end well.

“Even vows break, when they lose meaning for their makers.”I am clutching my couch cushions I am clutching my couch cushions I am clutching my couch cushions because as I said before, this CANNOT END WELL and also: FOREBODING! FORESHADOWING! THIS CANNOT END WELL AND I NEED A DRINK OR SOMETHING ( ... )

apsaraqueen September 5 2011, 04:52:37 UTC

if Jadeite were half as clever as the thinks himself to be

LOL. he is not. oh, god, poor boy is REALLY not, even if he is a pretty bright little crayon, all things considered.

the sex scene almost necessitated a very cold shower

i am not sure what this says about me (probably nothing that should be explored too deeply), but the sex scene was probably one of the only parts of this chapter i didn't have to edit 97639867 times. i'm glad it worked for you :D

it makes me want to clap like a seal!

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