I like this poem

[apu_shakes_it]

Girls Girls Girls

Pour into me

Make my glass half full

Its all depends on the

Physical

The restraint

You leave heavy heavy on me

Time, time will push away those who care

And lies, lies will keep the needy feeding for more

Boys boys boys

Hold a strong and straight posture

Show me what its worth

Don’t tell me what you need

Take what you want

Make my glass

Comments

[cardboard_rocks]

I really really like this poem. A lot. I know that's probably not the indepth analyisis you were looking for...but. I just really like it. It...sticks out in my mind I guess. I dunno...sorry I'm not very succinct (sp?).

[elbels]

i like " and the alternatives shouldnt notice so little" i really like that line