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[aqualentusfusco]

My words irritate me. I wish I could write simply, concisely. I want sentences like bullets, not butterflies fluttering aimlessly. I can barely stand to read the mess of diction and syntax, which pours out of me in paltry prose. I choke on every adjective

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[quelle_wilwarin]

I want sentences like bullets, not butterflies fluttering aimlessly >> i've felt that often. but may I reassure you that your sentences hit home like bullets; your writing is incredible powerful. no worries there.

and I also adore rent :) especially la vie boheme.