Fic: Boy, It’s More Than I Dare (to Think About) [TSN, Mark/Eduardo]

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Title: Boy, It’s More Than I Dare (to Think About)
Fandom: The Social Network
Pairing: Mark/Eduardo, past Eduardo/Other
Rating: R/NC-17 overall.
Warnings: Voyeurism, underage sex, bondage, and orgasm denial. [That should be about it, I think.]
Word count: ~4,750
Summary: Mark’s starting to feel a slight twinge of regret and a little

Comments

[davyjonesing]

LMAO! This was great! A perfect mix of hot and funny. I loved the sort of progression of it, following Mark's thought process through the whole thing. Especially:

Mark has an internal debate for a moment or two over whether he should keep watching or do the responsible thing by putting everything back in the journal and pretend like he never found it to begin with.

He decides to fast-forward through the DVD, while he deliberates. It’s clearly the best way to make a well-informed decision.Clearly. It's almost like it's not his fault at all, it's logic's fault. Clearly. And aw, the part where Wardo has to explain about plausible deniability

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Just porn, no melodrama should be my new life disclaimer. Or Wardo's really. He's young and smart and gorgeous and should be taking full advantage of that. So there should really be no guilt/shame in being open sexually. That legit never even crossed my mind--I mean, it's okay if people are into that, but slut-shaming is just not how I roll. And teenage experimentation aside, Wardo is still totally virtuous. [So maybe he has some daddy issues, that doesn't mean he's totally fucked up in every other aspect of his life. Um.] But yes, I'm so pleased you found it both hot and funny. At some point, their banter/back-and-forth came out of nowhere and I was conflicted over whether it worked with all the porn or whatever, but I guess it does

[astrofisica]

I enjoyed this a lot but, ah, FULL THOUGHTS LATER when I am not too lazy to log into Livejournal on my computer proper.

[astrofisica]

LOL k. I will be piggybacking on Adriana's comment for a second and agree that I am glad you didn't add any mentioning "slut" etc, because it is so rare to see fics with this prompt that do not go that route. I mean, it is so easy to make him freak out about Eduardo's candidness over his sexuality but you didn't and I am so happy!!! IT'S SO AWKWARD READING STORIES THAT GO THAT ROUTE but, uh, there's nothing to be ashamed of. If it is willing and you are enjoying yourself, why should there shame.

“I’m being serious here, Wardo.” Mark frowns, a little confusedly. "Wait-who came up with this idiotic drinking policy anyway?"

Eduardo turns to glare at him. “Are you kidding me?”

Mark just stares blankly back.

"Jesus, Mark. You did," Wardo exclaims, half in frustration and in disbelief.I LOL'd hard turning this bit. Like, of course, it was Mark's idea and of course he did not remember, and the punishment bit was just brilliant. tbh I hope Eduardo left him there overnight. OKAY THIS COMMENT ISN'T THE PERFECTION YOU WERE PROBS HOPING

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[STOP OVERSELLING THINGS IF YOU'RE NOT GOING TO DELIVER. GOD.]

Seriously. Mark is so dumb sometimes. Like obviously Wardo just wants him any way he can get him. Even if that means justifying hookups with lameass excuses like drinking. Ugh.

SO AWKWARD. Eduardo probably has a whole slew of issues, but I don't really care for his sexuality to be one of them. [I mean, I'm sure it can be done right/well, but it's not for me.] But you know I am not one for too much drama, so this is some weird hybrid of porn and hilarity I guess. I AM GLAD YOU STILL LIKED IT THOUGH. Though you probably have too much faith in my writing abilities.

Wardo is far too sweet to leave him there all night, but he's no pushover, so I give it a couple hours or something. We'll see if I ever write a follow-up.

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Thank you so much!

Haha, well, Mark kinda had it coming. ;) But I'm sure Wardo felt bad enough to come back not horribly long after.

[tafidadarling]

Oh wow. This is amazing. ♥

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Thanks so much! :)

[tafidadarling]

You're welcome dear. :)

[i_rise_inside]

this was deliciously hot. and hilarious. i do love mark being a creep, way too much, and how conveniently and logically he justifies his actions to himself.

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Thank you so much! I figured that's what Mark would do when presented with this kind of scenario. :D