Comments | aqualined: Fic: Boy, It’s More Than I Dare (to Think About) [TSN, Mark/Eduardo]

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Fic: Boy, It’s More Than I Dare (to Think About) [TSN, Mark/Eduardo]

Apr 07, 2011 04:28

Title: Boy, It’s More Than I Dare (to Think About)
Fandom: The Social Network
Pairing: Mark/Eduardo, past Eduardo/Other
Rating: R/NC-17 overall.
Warnings: Voyeurism, underage sex, bondage, and orgasm denial. [That should be about it, I think.]
Word count: ~4,750
Summary: Mark’s starting to feel a slight twinge of regret and a little ( Read more... )

tsn, fic, mark/eduardo

Comments 29

thisissirius April 8 2011, 22:11:04 UTC

THIS IS SO GREAT.

The PERFECT combination of hot and funny haha.

aqualined April 10 2011, 05:41:19 UTC

Thanks so much!

I'm glad I was able to strike that balance. :D

colazitron April 9 2011, 12:09:41 UTC

I love that Wardo ACTUALLY left Mark there.

aqualined April 10 2011, 05:41:54 UTC

Well, that is the only way Mark will learn. ;)

redinteriors April 9 2011, 18:25:09 UTC

G U R L. (this is corcordium btw!!) THIS. WAS. REALLY. GREAT. I must confess a lot of the time when I see a fic with a word count that is over 1000 words or so, my eyes glaze over and I put off reading it. But you made almost 5000 words of fic go by so fast, and I never wanted to stop reading! ACCOMPLISHMENT. You have a great flow, and you've written this situation with such great humour and dialogue ( ... )

aqualined April 10 2011, 05:44:23 UTC

Oh my god, Sisi. I AM SO PSYCHED THAT YOU DON'T FIND MY WRITING TERRIBLE. And I'm pleased that it didn't bore you either, haha. [But really, why do all of you think I'm funny and literate and shit? This is too much.]Why are you like this? There are SO MANY GOOD AUs out there. And canon stuff of course. READ THEM ALL. Though it's quite possible that I read too much fic. Eh. [No, but msg me your e-mail if you want 12894571294 recs. I've already compiled a bunch for people and I don't think I can stop ( ... )

teawithnoddy April 10 2011, 09:27:53 UTC

Oh, gosh, finally LJ stops being an arsehole long enough for me to comment on this glorious thing. (I'm the OP, and have been trying to read this since you posted the link in my ask, but homework, and site malfunctions kept cock blocking me.)

This was perfect. The secret boarding school sex tape, the little bit of bondage, and edging, (oh my god, all of my kinks), and I also want to agree with everyone who has already commented on Eduardo's lack of shame being such a positive, and the fact that you didn't actually use the word slut, which I adore (because even though I used it in the prompt, I much prefer characters owning their sexuality and not being ashamed of something that isn't actually shameful.)

Stupid Mark with his drunken shenanigans only rule.

I wish I could leave something more eloquent than this, but I'm just going to leave it at, holy hell, I hope there's a sequel.

(Third time I've tried to post this comment, so fingers crossed it works.)

aqualined April 11 2011, 07:52:10 UTC

[LJ is the worst. :/]

Ah, thank you so much! I'm so glad you finally got the time to read/comment and even better that you liked it. :D Like I mentioned in previous comments, I don't mind the idea of "slutty" Wardo, but it's never been something I felt comfortable writing myself, so I'm incredibly pleased I was able to fill your prompt in way that wasn't limited by the word, but still enjoyable. And yes, Eduardo really has no reason not to be comfortable in his sexuality so I'm really glad this all came through. :)

Ugh, Mark is just terrible sometimes with his obliviousness.

I will absolutely try my best to write a follow-up that either covers what happens to Mark later or maybe their previous drunk making out. Or both. We shall see. :D