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[aquaria334]

I have just posted my first entry to a story-writing competition on Gaia. =D
Admittedly, I have posted entries to story-writing competitions before, but only on crappy sites where stories about vampires and/or self harm were considered 'deep'. Anyway, here it is. Wish me luck.

Comments

[enaranie]

Wow. That was cool. You write really well ^^ The only thing is your formatting - I don't know if pasting messed up it, but you need a line break between paragraphs, it just makes it easier to read ^_~

What was the prompt? (also, what's your username? I'll add you)

[aquaria334]

Well I copied and pasted it from my computer. I'll just go sort it out...

The story had to be about despair, and inspired by one of several songs that the judge-person listed (I chose 'Rem' from the Death Note OST). If you want I'll post a link to the competition.

[enaranie]

Ahh, cool ^^ Some Gaia contests are really weird... that one sounds fun. Good luck! ^^ You should do well, it is really good... Debbie was a whole lot more coherent about that part than me ^^;;

[merrie_oriensis]

That's amazing! You created the church atmosphere really well at the same time as showing Jenny's feelings very powerfully. It felt really intense.

[aquaria334]

Thanks!