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[caseyvalhalla]

So I lied about putting this up earlier, but I had some wicked homework to deal with, so. Anyhow, this fic is for feraldolce, who bid for it and helped raise over 100k in relief donations over at help_japan. After mulling over her prompts, I decided it was about time I went to play in the Next Life Fic sandbox. Of course, this being me, it ended up being a horse of

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[darthvair_65]

This is ridiculously beautiful.

Oh man.

I know you probably have a large collection, but you you have my heart as well.

I'm sorry I can't quite put my feelings into words.

[caseyvalhalla]

I do have a rather large and steadily growing collection of things like that. Hearts, souls, firstborn children, etc. Not entirely sure what to do with them all but they look pretty on a shelf. ^^

I don't mind really if you don't know what to say, it leaves me kind of flabbergasted that something I wrote had that effect, either way. Thanks.

[ravewalker]

Holy freaking wow. I'd follow on from Jen's comment about adding my heart to the collection, but you had mine a long time ago.

[theplumtomato]

There are no words for how beautiful and heart-wrenchingly lovely and confusing this is.
You are a absolute genius and a goddess and I can't express how much I adore your writing and what it means to me when I read it.
I will also add my heart along with Jenn and Rae <3
Thank you so much for sharing this and being utterly marvelous

[mirrorbrothers]

I love good reincarnation stories. (Have you read Years of Rice and Salt?) I love trying to figure it out every time: "who are you this time? How are you turning out in this time, in this situation?" And I loved it here, following the story and the consequences of how it's happened before. I had way too much fun trying to match Damien and Lauren and Justin up with KH characters. (Pence, Olette, and Sora? Seifer, Olette, and Vivi? Though there's no good reason they all need to be the same genders...) Jose was easy, because you actually just out and called him Hayner in the narration once in part 1. (Was that on purpose? It definitely helped me out.)

And the way it's so uncertain and unfinished at the end - not in the sense of incomplete writing, but in the sense of they have these whole lives to lead - again - and they're not sure how it can work...

This is absolutely awesome.

[yurameki_tenshi]

This was absolutely amazing. I love the slip of names that would be present ocassionally (Demyx, Hayner, etc.) And the general idea of this was just awesome <3 You are stunning for having written this :3