Love from Venus: Arc 1, Part 5

[aquarius_galuxy]

Title: Love from Venus
Part: ARC 1, Part 5
Author: Aquarius Galuxy
Fandom: Power Stone
Pairing: Rouge/Ryoma
Genre: Romance/Erotica/Friendship/AU
Rating: varies from PG to NC-17
Word count: 3,784
Summary: Sales representative Ryoma Iwakura's life careens off course when a business deal brings him to a hostess bar, and into the company of hostess and

Comments

[katden]

Hey there! :) I've been reading this in sporadic intervals (sorry for not being more diligent), and I noticed you've never posted a note like: con-crit welcome. Are you interested in con-crit/comments/editing before you get the manuscript finished? If so, just say the word :D

[aquarius_galuxy]

=O you're reading it? I've never really asked for opinions/crits/etc 'cause I'd assumed that there weren't very many people reading it (just at most a couple friends, that's all), and they don't usually post crits. =p

I don't mind con-crit/comments/editing, though this piece isn't a very serious one (mainly to satisfy my craving for putting the characters through my version of hell), so there might be other things you could spend your time better on, I don't know =p

Plus, I'm aware that my writing is kind of sub-standard through this series, mostly due to school and lack of time to get it polished =p So there probably are mistakes and loopholes everywhere! =p

so to put it simply, I'm interested in whatever input you'd like to offer, just don't strain yourself or anything like that =p

[aquarius_galuxy]

(Sorry, just wondering, were the latest chapters so bad that you've decided to volunteer to step in and help? =p)

[darlinleo]

NO!

I've actually noticed that you don't ask for con-crit before but only just now took the time to ask. We're all usually YELLING for people to leave input ;) So I thought you might be trying to just finish your word count goal or something, and I didn't want to toss in info and screw up your progress.