Balloon

Feb 16, 2010 04:02


title: Balloon
pairing: g-ri
genre: FLUFF
a/n: okay so, first fic for g-ri, i did this in one night SO IT SUCKS D; SORRY. but, you can definitely count on better written higher quality fics in the near future. simple story line cause i was in a rush, nothing too complicated at all.

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minn_rox February 16 2010, 18:12:20 UTC
i like it a lot..very sweet..(^_^)..

i like how the story unfolds..it's simple yet very shweet..

gaah, i miss gri a lot.. cheesy!ji is totally LOVE~ cute!ri is a plus..thanks for writing and sharing them.. totally made my nite..

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aqueerpanic February 16 2010, 21:09:58 UTC
yes, very simple indeed, haha.

me too :/ i dont want to admit it but g-ri kinda died this year T______T... lets hope for more g-ri soonnnn D; but yes, cheesy!jiyong is the best! haha.

thank you for reading~!

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vaneszikkipower February 16 2010, 18:29:46 UTC
OMG soooo sweet.
I really liked this.
You did an awesome job with this fic!!!
Congrats :)

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aqueerpanic February 16 2010, 21:11:03 UTC
haha thank you so much for reading~!

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vaneszikkipower February 17 2010, 07:24:21 UTC
You're welcome :)

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jenpai February 16 2010, 23:32:37 UTC
oh hi!! hello there~
can i take a spot? kekeke...
brb. off to read the fic.

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jenpai February 17 2010, 01:10:04 UTC
omo~ this is soooo beautiful...i nearly cried.

it has a very nice flow. I like how G-Ri's relationship developed from close friendship to love.

"I think...I think I would be the person holding the balloon, keeping it close to me and not letting it go. I don't think I could stand watching it leave."
"If you held onto it strong enough, I'll bet it won't go."
"Then I'll hold it tight until forever."

I <3 it!

pleeeease write more G-ri.
^___^

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aqueerpanic February 17 2010, 02:17:33 UTC
really? im glad you thought it flowed cause i thought it didnt, so yay! haha :P

look forward to a better written, better storyline fic soon! thank you so much for reading~! :D

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aqueerpanic February 17 2010, 03:31:49 UTC
LOL you definitely gave off the fangirling vibe there! hahaaa.

I WILL DEFINITELY WRITE ANOTHER FIC - NEW AND IMPROVED - SOON. and expect it to be a lot better than this, or somewhat...hopefully...? >___>?

im glad you enjoyed it! idk i probably won't write a fic with an uber complicated storyline until later, cause itll take me awhile and i dont have that much time :/ so light-readers is how i roll for now! bahaha. so good thing you enjoyed this!

i really appreciate you reading this and taking the time to write comments made of win :D haha. thank you so much for readingggg~!

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ssunsetgloww February 17 2010, 13:46:58 UTC
LOved it loved it!!!!!! GAhhhhh... I'm into school fics so you made me really happy :)
I loved how you writed them falling for each other slowly:)))) and yes I can read english and understand it but I can't write it, as you can see...

AND NO IT DOESN'T SUCK!

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aqueerpanic February 18 2010, 00:58:29 UTC
your english seems fine! :O?

haha thank you so much for readingggg~! :DD

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