i wanted to quote so many lines/paragraphs in this chapter. but i don't want my comment to be just full of quotes. XD waaah i love everything in this chapter. my favorite so far. love the way jiyong wonders if ri sees things in a different perspective - if it's more detailed etc <3. and that he sees ri as a work of art gaaaah. and how his lips lingered at ri's ear damn i love that a lot. and then the part where jiyong let ri feel the music through piano playing i like that part too much. and i love how you ended that scene with them kissing like that!
i like the love making part <3. it is beautiful and isn't really just pure sex.
and fuck! the ending of this chapter just caught me off guard gaaaaah!!!!
well, the next time i post another fic, PLEASE post a comment like that. i appreciate those the most! :P it tells me that people are putting out a complete thought.
This is a really freakin good fic. Damn. So many creative moments. Loved the part where Jiyong played him a song and he held his hands on the piano. ;u; Lots of parts I loved actually
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i like the love making part <3. it is beautiful and isn't really just pure sex.
and fuck! the ending of this chapter just caught me off guard gaaaaah!!!!
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This is a really freakin good fic. Damn. So many creative moments. Loved the part where Jiyong played him a song and he held his hands on the piano. ;u; Lots of parts I loved actually
I'm gonna have to stalk more of your fics. *o* <3
I'll be back to read more laterrr~
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