Preview | The Dream Maker | Jiyong, Seungri
Rating: R? (Might change this later)
a/n: so, i think ive been dead for well over a month now maybe? haha >__>... but to make up for that absence, here's a little preview of what im hopefully going to complete soon. this is unedited for now btw.
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this part is just an...excerpt? from the whole story, and youll find out later that it isnt really important to the rest of the story, lol.
just a little preview x]
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I just knew this was going to be something good, I already like the way you started this fiction, how beautifully this is put together, and it somehow reminds me of a scene out of my OWN life, so it actually makes me even more curious, and eventhough I don't know what this story is about, I think there is something very bad happening to Ji because when I read this, it seems like Ji is very emotional and.. maybe suicidal? '' how beautifully close he was to ending his life''
I am very curious, and I am kinda expecting this to be as good as your other fic, I'm glad this is kinda chaptered, because I love to read more then only one 'page'
Lookin' forward to it, please, don't rush this.. please, morning coffee ended too soon, and I don't want this one to end the same way
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well, the story is kinda fantasy-ish in a way? but i mean, jiyong is emotional and suicidal, i guess you can say, from this part.
haha, i guess we'll see what happens when im writing the ending. i have an idea in mind for the ending already, so i know it wont be rushed, but the parts that transition into the ending is something ill have to try not to rush.
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oh and btw, this is a oneshot. everyones been getting confused. just thought id warn you, haha!
>___>...
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thanks for readinggg~ :D
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