The Dream Maker [oneshot]

Jun 09, 2010 17:41

The Dream Maker [oneshot]
Jiyong/Seungri | R | Fantasy | 10,926

_So after a thousand years, i finally found the motivation to finish this story haha >__>... this is based on Jiyong's song One Year Station, so i highly suggest that you go read the english translations of the lyrics before you read this! Enjoy :]

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lilacblossoms June 9 2010, 23:47:46 UTC
spot from ninja stranger! brb tomorrow have to sleep now! :)

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aqueerpanic June 10 2010, 00:02:29 UTC
OMG YOU ARE SO FAST O_____O!!! hahaha xP

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lilacblossoms June 10 2010, 08:22:34 UTC
...this is just so bittersweet. I'm smiling and almost crying at the same time. Like this: TuT

/off to read part 2

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papersanguine June 10 2010, 00:43:18 UTC
This whole fic is making my heart skip a beat. I love every single line. I would leave a longer comment, but i'm too excited to click on part two!

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aqueerpanic June 10 2010, 06:25:31 UTC
haha yeah it was originally supposed to be based on that song, but then i read the lyrics to One Year Station and i was like, well shit this seriously relates perfectly to this fic o____O haha.

background music REALLY adds emotion to everything x] is your question rhetorical...? o.o? if not, well, your comment is enough feedback :]

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kwonjiyongvips June 10 2010, 17:07:41 UTC
ONESHOT?! NO! BRB READING ~

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aqueerpanic June 10 2010, 18:54:49 UTC
theres a part 2! ;DD if that counts.

haha LJ didnt let me post this whole fic into one post cause it was too long wtf D;

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kwonjiyongvips June 10 2010, 20:24:04 UTC
.. and the weather outside was too cold, making the glass frosty at its edges.
~ Actually.. weirdly enough, at that part I began to cry in RL, there is something about that sentence that hits right into me, the image of winter, it just hurts me because of my past.

I’m bound to you, on this earth, until my job here is done.
~ Reminds me of a girl I love, I would give her anything of myself just to make her happy, and let her stay happy for the rest of her life, I won't leave too, until my job is done.

It might not be the same for you, but your existence is very valuable to me.”
~ And that's something she used to tell me so many times.

Btw, the whole restaurant part was gorgeous!

nexxxxxt~~~~~~~~~~~~

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aqueerpanic June 11 2010, 07:13:26 UTC
im not going to ask anything personal, but it makes me feel great that parts of this fic related to a lot of my readers, one being you :]

thank you very much for posting a thoughtful comment with feedback, and thank you for reading!

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