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lilacblossoms June 10 2010, 08:48:55 UTC
IDEK!

"you don’t have to be a kid to have dreams to reach for" <--- Thank you for telling me this!

Usually I go crazy about POV-changes all so abruptly but this time it just felt so right, like Seungri and Jiyong were so intertwined that you even had to acknowledge it in your way of writing.

Thank you so much!

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aqueerpanic June 10 2010, 08:54:45 UTC
yeah, i hear my parents saying all the time that theyre too old to do anything and im always thinking otherwise =_____=

haha yeah i realized while in the middle of writing this that the POV changes went HAYWIRE and i was like, shit, im not about to go back and change everything...>___>...haha oh well D;

thank YOU for reading ;D!

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peligr0 June 10 2010, 12:04:29 UTC
aaaahhhh Gri <3. this is bittersweet and overall beautiful. light like lullaby but is actually deep.

my favorite part was their train ride to seoul. the image of them like that and the lines are <333.

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aqueerpanic June 10 2010, 19:03:50 UTC
yeah, the train ride part in my mind looked very gloomy, aside from those two ;D fluroescent lights, kinda eerieeee.

thank you very muchoooo! :D

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peligr0 June 11 2010, 03:11:17 UTC
yes eerie! i love it ideky hahaha <333 much love to you hehe.

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aqueerpanic June 11 2010, 07:15:02 UTC
im glad you enjoyed it though! :]

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parkchoongjae June 10 2010, 16:35:42 UTC
omg. wai. wai.

this is beautiful.

seungri as a star is just AAJKHDJKHDJHHDJHD ;__; just gorgeous.

and the last part was lovely. Gaah, I knew he'd come back for jiyong. omg. i can't explain enough how I love this fic. <333

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aqueerpanic June 10 2010, 19:02:12 UTC
hahaha yeah, i dont even remember where i got that idea... it was supposed to be Jiyong who was the star cause him with blonde hair just fits the role perfectly x]

aw, thank you very mucho! i hope the ending was alright this time? a good finish? :]

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parkchoongjae June 11 2010, 14:52:04 UTC
yes the ending was the saving glory. My heart was heavy reading the whole thing but the ending made up for it. there's a rainbow always after the rain. <3

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I'm in love with this fic *huggle* stupidefleurk June 10 2010, 17:13:00 UTC
It was incredibly beautiful,I just reread the preview few days ago and I didn't expect the fic to be this brillant (I mean,I think it's your best fanfic here,well my favorite).

That's my favorite kind of fanfic(angst FTW),the one who make you feel the pain of the hero like it's your.I was pretty hearbroken but the ending heal everything :p

I love how you end the story,it gives us the possibilty to imagine what's going to happen,I think that's great cause I'm going to spend a lot of time thinking of this fic LOL

Oh and I was so exicted when I saw "part2" lol I was already sad ,thinking it was too short.
That's another reason why I love your fics:they are pretty long and it's a huge pleasure to read them(+ like someone said,the song and the music in general add a lot of emotion).

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Re: I'm in love with this fic *huggle* aqueerpanic June 10 2010, 18:59:30 UTC
haha yeah, the preview was just a completely random scene from the whole fic x]and yeah, i guess i just spent a serious amount of time writing this. i think i actually started in april, gave up towards the end of may, then started it again and finished hahaa.

it was supposed to be a sad ending, i had jiyong killing himself in mind for the end...>___>...

haha yeah, long fics are my specialty! thanks you veryyy mucho for reading! :]

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silent_shout1 June 10 2010, 18:17:13 UTC
Erm, i'm not much of a talker, but I seriously loved this fic. Like, seriously. x

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aqueerpanic June 10 2010, 18:55:55 UTC
thank youu very mucho! ;D

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