Tempus

[aqueerpanic]

Tempus [butterfly kisses one-shot entry]
Jiyong/Seungri | R | Apocalypse AU + Fantasy? | 4,567
Prompt_ You wish you could find something warm because you're shivering cold.

There were four seasons that existed: winter, spring, summer, and autumn. He was winter, born on the twentieth of December at midnight, life dull and colorless, empty and cold,

Comments

[stupidefleurk]

SPOT !

oh breathe me,I love this song so much !sorry I'm random -_-

[aqueerpanic]

o.o! wow you are a ninja *0*

yes, listen to it while reading. idk but it just fit perfectly with the mood and atmosphere of the fic.

ENJOY! :] looking forward to feedback ;D

[stupidefleurk]

If I listen to it while reading I'll cry for sure keke
I'm going to read it after eating(cause I'm starving X_X).I'm sure it'll be awesome as always ;)

[aqueerpanic]

you have to listen to it! and youll definitely get the feel of what i felt while writing :]

ahhh thank you thank you. that sounds so funny cause its 4 in the morning over here haha X]

[lilacblossoms]

This is just so bittersweet. Sad and beautiful and it made my day. It's so nice to FEEL.

Thank you!

[aqueerpanic]

aww, im glad you enjoyed it. thank you for reading and commenting :]

[minamelody]

Absolutely beautiful. I don't have much words to say; it's just sad and beautiful and amazing and ♥. I love the originality and the imagery is just...BEAUTIFUL. REALLY. aahh i love it, added to my memories~~ thank you for sharing this :)

[aqueerpanic]

aww, im glad you enjoyed it :] thank you very much for reading and commenting :]

[g_odalisque13]

god this was just beautiful. and tragic and romantic and so many other things.
you just pulled me into their world.
and everything was so surreal and dreamy, but it still felt so real at the same time.
and i love how their relationship progressed.
hope that Jiyong is right and it's just the beginning b/c i was getting choked up reading this.
but it was absolutely brilliant.
stunning

[aqueerpanic]

aw, im glad this made you think all this. thank you very much for a thoughtful comment, and for reading! :]

[papersanguine]

Wow. Just frickin wow.

You created this entire world of people and love and indifference and still made every reader feel a part of it. I can't express just how much this fic represents truely inspired fiction.

Every single word fell in the perfect rhythm and the juxtaposition of summer and winter in Jiyong and Seungri is perfect. The fact that they found each other and stayed until the end of everything = <3. And the stars falling from the sky made me so sad for some reason. The depiction of the world ending upon their time together breaks my heart.

It was a really beautiful piece. I would say one of my favorites of all time.

[aqueerpanic]

>///<

thank you so much. it made me feel so proud and good after reading your comment and feedback. im glad you enjoyed it :] i tried contrasting their lives, the cold and heat, as well as i could, so i included just life in general to back the idea up.

(your comment is written so well with such great vocabulary, i love it.)

i look forward to receiving comments from you. always full of thought.

thank you very much for reading :]