Tempus

[aqueerpanic]

Tempus [butterfly kisses one-shot entry]
Jiyong/Seungri | R | Apocalypse AU + Fantasy? | 4,567
Prompt_ You wish you could find something warm because you're shivering cold.

There were four seasons that existed: winter, spring, summer, and autumn. He was winter, born on the twentieth of December at midnight, life dull and colorless, empty and cold,

Comments

[ninja_starshine]

wow. this was so original. an amazing entry for the prompt. loved the stars going out, and the short part where they made love and just- everything really. beautiful, beautiful writing and storyline.

oh and that last line really got me. i loved this, can't nearly give you enough credit for how good this is ♥

[aqueerpanic]

im glad you enjoyed it :]

thank you very much for reading and commenting, i really appreciate it!

[aqueerpanic]

ahh, no dont say that. i love your writing! ill definitely try to comment more npeople's stories from now on. i can never find the time to sit down and give people the credit for their work :[

well, actually, i'm asian, but i have good english. ive learned how to write from other people on different fic sites. thats where ive learned my style for fics and basically fixed it into my own style.

i chose summer because its basically like the exact opposite of winter? spring is kind of like the opposite of autumn.

thank you so much for this comment. i LOVE getting comments like this because it really boosts my pride and inspiration to write yet another fic for my readers :] i really appreciated it, so thank you. for reading as well.

oh yeah! definitely! i try not to write angst, but i feel like if i write something even without a little bit of angst, it wont seem REAL, you know? but i try to make happy endings for everything :] im pretty sure one of my other fics has a happy ending? o.O i dont remember TT_________TT...

[peligr0]

because i'm backtracking through the comm and even though i read this before during the contest peroid, i haven't commented yet so here it is... lol

THIS IS ONE OF THE BESTEST GRI AU FICS EVER~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

the details omg. your take on the given prompt was superb! really bittersweet story. you are all sorts of amazing.

and, I LOVE BREATHE ME BY SIA OMGGGG <3. i told you this before, that i adore your song choices for fic writing haha <3.

[aqueerpanic]

I really enjoyed that contest :] even though it was a last minute thing for me, I loveddd reading the entries for the contest<33 they were awesomee.

I had fun with this prompt :D I thought so hard about it and tried thinking of a creative way that I could portray the cold-heat contrast, so what better way is there than to make them literally the heat and the cold, right? haha yeah, my thought process.

gah I love that song! but I noticed X] seems like you have a great sense in music too then ;D there's always that one song that fits the mood of the atmoshphere and it helps me think of scenes to write :]

[justcallmepriya]

I can't even quote my favourite part
BECAUSE I WANT TO COPY AND PASTE THE WHOLE STORY INTO THIS COMMENT! :D

Omg, this is so beautiful and wonderful and everything lovely.

I love the structure, I love your writing style, I love the idea of Seungri being Winter and Jiyong being Summer. I love the association of latin, the relevant numerical figures and dates associated with the seasons...basically as you can probably see already, I LOVE EVERYTHING!

*babbles and flails about*
<3

p.s. is it okay if i friend you?!???!?!?!??! 0_o *blinks*

[aqueerpanic]

ahh! i realized i never responded! :O!!!

but thank you, very much :] i'm flattered that you enjoyed it, writing style and structure and all. i tried incorporating as many heat-cold references as possible to really emphasize their differences :]

and as youve already did, ive added you back!

thankyouthankyouthankyouuu<33

[justcallmepriya]

You emphasised their differences really well, ahhhhh I just really love love love this story. :D

Thank you very much for adding me back also :) *dances about happily*

[wilwarinpapi]

Hello! Almost year ago I asked my friend to post here comment about getting a permission to translate it (I didnt have my own LJ that time and it seams like her comments was deleted or smth).

So I'm here to tell you, that I have traslate this work, and post it with all the credits, if you don't mind.

Sorry for being this late, if it's not ok for you could we find some decision?