The Art in Searching Sequel
Jiyong/Seungri | R | Dance/Predebut AU | 3,914
Seungri is in denial. He's so far into the closet Jiyong thinks he might just be stuck in there.
a/n: yes, so, the sequel! honestly, i wrote this in one night, it's currently 5:18 am, not edited, but i just really wanted to finish this because i've got this burning prompt in
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ri must be too loud huh!
bet ji must be a happy camper that nite.
and big bang it is!
i'll give better comment later.
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“Well, if you’re pants weren’t so---” he yanks the keys out of the pocket. “---fucking tight, I wouldn’t have to unwillingly fondle your ass.” Oh, Ri, you love it!
it’s become habitual to the point they don’t waste their time knocking. This line was so much <3 that i couldn't help but smile. In one small sentence you managed to convey the close knit friendship they have. The kind of friendship everyone hopes to have. I still have to knock when i go to all my friends homes. <--jealous.
The words “Too fast to live, too young to die” are carved into his back in black ink Sorry for the HUGE amount of quotes, but this one stuck out at me too! I love the word "carved". It just ::shiver:: i don't know. Its so perfect!
“I know you’ll be a great inspiration to people one day, Jiyong-hyung.” This one really made me think of my own life cause there is always ( ... )
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ahhh, its okay. i have to knock too :< maybe one day, we'll be able to enter into our friends' rooms/houses without knocking? :D?
oh, dont worry about the quoting! i secretly LOVE comments like yours. they make me sooo happy and excited ;D cause theyre so long and epic<33
yeahh, i try my best not to rush anything, and im glad you thought it wasn't forced/rushed, just as i intended for my readers.
guh, thanks so much for this comment. since this fic wasn't super deep and angsty or anything, i was expecting simple comments, then you come along and give this EPIC comment and i was not expecting it :] i love it!
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you think so? thats great, because i tried writing them close to their real selves for this fic :]
thanks for reading and commenting!
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