The Art in Searching Sequel

Jul 18, 2010 05:25


The Art in Searching Sequel
Jiyong/Seungri | R | Dance/Predebut AU | 3,914
Seungri is in denial. He's so far into the closet Jiyong thinks he might just be stuck in there.

a/n: yes, so, the sequel! honestly, i wrote this in one night, it's currently 5:18 am, not edited, but i just really wanted to finish this because i've got this burning prompt in ( Read more... )

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aishiteru_amie July 18 2010, 11:47:30 UTC
spot!

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aishiteru_amie July 18 2010, 11:48:33 UTC
hehehe!
ri must be too loud huh!
bet ji must be a happy camper that nite.
and big bang it is!
i'll give better comment later.

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aqueerpanic July 19 2010, 02:19:23 UTC
haha yup, just how jiyong likes it? ;DDD???

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big_bang_47 July 18 2010, 13:05:43 UTC
damn, thats a good fic :D

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aqueerpanic July 19 2010, 02:19:41 UTC
bahhh thank you ;D

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squippy67 July 18 2010, 16:28:17 UTC
Hi! I love your writing! It always flows so well. And I love light and fluffy fics like this! :) ♥

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aqueerpanic July 19 2010, 02:21:01 UTC
aw, you think so? thank you very much! yeah, me too. i lovee reading light and fluffy fics, but when i actually write them myself, i find them to be uber cheesy *3*

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papersanguine July 18 2010, 17:32:38 UTC
I actually got so excited when i saw your name next to a fic that i clicked it and started reading before i realized that it was the sequel! Haha, I, of course, love it to pieces!

“Well, if you’re pants weren’t so---” he yanks the keys out of the pocket. “---fucking tight, I wouldn’t have to unwillingly fondle your ass.” Oh, Ri, you love it!

it’s become habitual to the point they don’t waste their time knocking. This line was so much <3 that i couldn't help but smile. In one small sentence you managed to convey the close knit friendship they have. The kind of friendship everyone hopes to have. I still have to knock when i go to all my friends homes. <--jealous.

The words “Too fast to live, too young to die” are carved into his back in black ink Sorry for the HUGE amount of quotes, but this one stuck out at me too! I love the word "carved". It just ::shiver:: i don't know. Its so perfect!

“I know you’ll be a great inspiration to people one day, Jiyong-hyung.” This one really made me think of my own life cause there is always ( ... )

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aqueerpanic July 19 2010, 02:27:38 UTC
haha yeah, i wrote the sequel like i promised! ;D cause the original had like, no g-ri interaction in it D:

ahhh, its okay. i have to knock too :< maybe one day, we'll be able to enter into our friends' rooms/houses without knocking? :D?

oh, dont worry about the quoting! i secretly LOVE comments like yours. they make me sooo happy and excited ;D cause theyre so long and epic<33

yeahh, i try my best not to rush anything, and im glad you thought it wasn't forced/rushed, just as i intended for my readers.

guh, thanks so much for this comment. since this fic wasn't super deep and angsty or anything, i was expecting simple comments, then you come along and give this EPIC comment and i was not expecting it :] i love it!

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summanaro July 18 2010, 21:29:46 UTC
I don't know how I missed the first part of this but I just read both of them and I am like, in love with your fics. lol you write jiyong and seungri so well, so in-character. awesome job!

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aqueerpanic July 19 2010, 02:29:11 UTC
haha! thank you for reading both parts though, glad you enjoyed it<33

you think so? thats great, because i tried writing them close to their real selves for this fic :]

thanks for reading and commenting!

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