If you haven't already, you guys have got to check out these fics first for their pure awesomeness:
venusorbit1 for her basketball trash-talking fic found here:
http://venusorbit1.livejournal.com/6171.html#cutid1 charliechaplin2 for her rugby fic found here:
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The sad fact that this event will go down in history as "Game Where Jason Cracked His Head Open" instead of what it SHOULD be (according to at least 2 people): "Day of the Legendary Alley-Oop."
They will probably give Jason shit for killing their glory-moment with his stupid concussion ("you goddamn pussy!"). Can I reference this incident in "Econ" or "Curveball"?
And now I owe Raye's response!
GOOD one, girl!
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And ahhh, of course you can reference! They're YOUR characters! ^_^ (But, thanks for asking.)
I'm looking forward to the phone call!
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Second: I forgot to mention how much I like the details in this one, like the fact that you remembered that Noah went on a recruiting mission in Economics and picked up Jason as point and Kevin as center (who can dunk...very important!)
Also:
*Darien's a dick and Noah won't stop shit-talking
*Kevin gets all "concerned doctor type" only after Jason pukes and collapses, and before that he was also shit-talking
*Darien picks "Rock" almost every single time
“You’re only up two,” Kevin growled back, as he and Noah jostled for positioning. Darien passed him the ball a moment later, and Kevin began to back in against Noah. Kevin picked up the ball and faked like he was going to move towards the center of the court to score. When he felt Noah shift, he dropped stepped the other way and went up for the lay up. Noah, who was out of position, reached out in an attempt to restrain the man. Kevin still managed to score.I can SEE this part in my head perfectly. Way to go describing the ( ... )
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Darien picks "Rock" almost every single time
*ducks glares from Darien* I didn't even notice, but at least Kevin picked up on it! ^^;
(Ha, you should totally have Kevin making fun of Darien for being so predictable!)
I can SEE this part in my head perfectly. Way to go describing the action in really clear terms.
I'm so glad, because I was really trying to visualize the drop step move and trying to describe it in a way other than just 'he drop stepped and scored.'
You know what our next project is going to be? I seem to remember Noah breaking Kevin's fingers in Econ :)
Ohhhh, poor Kevin. But YES! And, Zach coaching. We totally need Zach coaching, because I can practically hear the obscenities!
And thanks, I got sick of the dark background! ^^;
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