SM Monthly Submission - Friendship

[arabianred]

Title: Girls Don't Cry
Author: Arabian Red
Theme: Friendship
Genre: General
Version: AR
Rating: PG (I know, I can't believe it either!)

Ummm, so not what I had on my list, but it kinda wrote itself so I can't really complain. And, I'm WAY behind on prompts, so yeah. ^^;

Comments

[jenbunny]

awww cute ^_^ I loved it!

[arabianred]

Thank you!! :D

[sea_thoughts]

Mmm, interesting! Are you going to continue with this world? I would like to see how their friendship develops.

“I’m not crying,” she reiterated, as she sniffled. She shot him another glare, as if daring him to contradict her. When he merely stared back at her, she continued, “He hit me in the eye. They won’t stop. I’m NOT crying.”

Very Rei.

[arabianred]

I think I am incapable of one-shots, no matter how hard I try. So yes, this will be continued! I have something planned if we fast forward a couple years, but I think I need something in between those few years first.

Thanks for the comment! :)

[arabianred]

Thank you! I've never written 'little' Rei, so I'm glad this came across well. Yes, Rubeus is quite the jerk! And, thank you for picking up those typos!! :)

P.S. I'm worried about hogging the thread over in red.

[venusorbit1]

PG!! What is this, the Disney Channel?? XD

“I got him better,”

HA! Right there you can tell she's an awesome chica. I like how you set up Rubeus as a classic bully that hits below the belt literally and figuratively. I like that Jadeite has beaten him before and isn't scared to do it again. Fuck it, I like fics of yours that have fights!

I also like that he stood up Endymion and they're probably going to give him "bros before hos" shit for it, and that he doesn't care. Are you going to continue with this series?

And I'm right there with you on being behind...the muse goes where it goes, ya know? And of course it only happens when you have a limited amount of time, too.

Anyway: very cute and great structure. Way to go! <3

[arabianred]

Hehe, yes, this LJ has temporarily transformed to the Disney Channel. I think that's the first time I've written something that could be classified as PG.

I'm really glad you like 'little' Rei. And I totally see Rubeus as a sociopath animal torturer in the making. Endymion and the others will definitely be giving Jade trouble once they realize where he's been disappearing off to! (So yup, there will be at least two more ficlets in this series.) Glad you liked! :)

[chibiangel413]

I love little Rei's courage and attitude despite being over matched, and then basically winning, great.

[arabianred]

Aww, thank you!! She's a spitfire, that one! :)