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VO1 Challenge

Mar 26, 2009 17:03

Title: A Touch of Darkness
Author: Arabian Red
Theme: Forbidden
Rating: NC-17
Characters: Rei, Jadeite
Notes: In response to VO1's challenge, combined with an old SM Monthly theme.
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jadeite, rei

Comments 10

venusorbit1 March 27 2009, 05:40:04 UTC

Hot hot. Badevil!shitennou + goodsenshi really appeals to me...guess we never stop loving the bad boys! And since it's smut, it's extra good. Seeing Rei take a walk on the wild side is really enjoyable, since she just seems to *melt* when he touches her! I honestly think that you should write a continuation!

charliechaplin2 March 27 2009, 20:18:45 UTC

Oh wow. She is wanting him bad.

“Liar,” he growled huskily, right before his lips crushed hers.
- I just went 'eep!' at that point. How didn't she just throw him down right there?

I agree with VO1, it needs to be continued! Because it's good.

arabianred March 27 2009, 23:01:40 UTC

Aww, thanks for support, although you both are being way too kind ... it needs a re-write! And this time, the kid gloves need to come off.

Well, at least I can learn from two of the best, right? :)

dreams_of_julie April 15 2009, 17:06:59 UTC

“After one whole month … you think you’re going to get it … that easy?”

I love this. Forceful Jadeite. I love seeing the dark side of the Shittennou and how Rei can't resist him even he is bad!!!

WOW I hope you continue with this story. ITS off the hook.

arabianred April 15 2009, 22:20:10 UTC

Oh I'm so glad you liked it!! This was my first senshi/shitennou piece I've ever posted, not to mention my first try at smut = total posting anxiety.

I think this side of Jade makes him all the sexier. ;)

And I do have a follow-up planned, but it's still very much in the works. I definitely want to keep exploring evil Jade, plus Rei's walk on the dark side, though.

sea_thoughts July 1 2009, 16:21:51 UTC

*fans self*

But he was going to make her beg, to punish her for the hell that was the last month. He was going to make sure she learned her lesson.

See, he would be like that even if he was good! That's what I love about him.

arabianred July 2 2009, 02:31:39 UTC

He would, wouldn't he?

P.S. How's Isamu doing? Is he coming to his senses soon?

sea_thoughts July 2 2009, 16:39:02 UTC

Ah, that's the problem. Isamu's perfectly aware of what he's doing. There won't be any 'awakening'.

arabianred July 4 2009, 15:33:00 UTC

Ah, then in that case, perhaps I should rephrase? When is someone going to KNOCK some sense into him? Hopefully soon?? I eagerly await the day. :)

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