The Smiting Ceremony has arrived. Enjoy!

Aug 03, 2004 10:25

If you participated and have questions about how I characterized you, please tell me. Also, please let me know if there's anything wrong, grammatically, logically, or otherwise, with this segment. I left the italics on for nearly half of the OFUCI visit, and no one informed me.


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araeph August 4 2004, 20:51:28 UTC
Oops...eheh. I was thinking of the fic that Laih did point out because it's the next one in my PPC file (other than the one Agent Rosie and I are doing together). You're right; sorry about that, Starfishofelves!

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starfishofelves August 9 2004, 19:17:48 UTC
Lovelylovelylovely ceremony. *hearts* And so very satisfying.

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agent_quen August 26 2004, 12:27:13 UTC
Oooh, that was fun. :)

And Nenya says the only error she can see is that Agent Nenya and Agent Tiranel aren't partners--they don't know each other, AFAIK--so Tiranel oughtn't to be waking Nenya up etc. Tiranel's Quen's ex-partner. (That we are all authored by the same person is confusingly coincidental. :P) But if it's too much of a pain to go back and change it, I suppose I could come up with an explanation as to why Tiranel would be waking Nenya up....

Anyway! Lovely descriptions of the agents, and of the food, and of the ceremony! And it's great to have Miiro's POV on the pre-ceremony initiation rites, too. :) The yelling of insults and the quoting of canon came at just the right parts of the ceremony, and the final glitterly explosion was perfect! Ahh, a memory to warm an agent's heart--

--SHWUMP! *sigh* That, my friend, was the secretary's version of the famous BEEEP. It means stacks of paperwork. I oughtn't revel in happy memories, it annoys the bloody Laws.

But it WAS fun! :D

--Quen

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