Essence [One-Shot]

[arakni666]

Alfred had always been a bit different. From the moment he was born, when his mother held him to her chest for the first time and gazed down into his tear-streaked, panicked young face, his family had known that he would not be like other boys. There was just something about him, a sense of untamed, wild freedom. Touched by the gods, his parents

Comments

[teamg_top]

I really really liked it

[ayboo_da_bish]

I've said it before, but this is absolutely beautiful. You really have this way with words that is simply amazing, and you can write poetic but elegant stories with actual substance, stories that make people think and really feel something for what you're writing. XD This is wonderful, please continue to post more! :D

[seraphic_dream]

Must I say that was absolutely beautiful? I'm nearly speechless with the sheer imagery of all of this and your diction was just perfect! The idea was so very creative and you wrote it so wonderfully. The wording was elegant and descriptive, you could feel the very emotions of the characters and bloody...I'm truly floundering around for the right words to describe what I just read!

Definitely one of my favourite fics from you and not only that, but also from the USUK community. You truly managed to capture Arthur being the actual forest and I love how you wrote out the end. I would go on but I don't want to tire you with my absolutely ecstatic ranting! Please keep up the wonderful work, Ara! Please!

[medev]

this was beautiful!!