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avadiablo September 8 2016, 20:57:38 UTC
I wanted to leave a comment on the first half already, but I just needed to read on to see what would happen!!

I love it :D The drama, the heart ache! I haven't seen many stories where Aiba gets his share of grieve - let alone him cheating on anyone! (*smacks Jun on the head*) The sexy flashes of the near past - ohhh yum!

Nicely done to include every one! (AiNino friendship solid as a rock!) And to have the three mains all deal with their fair share of insecurity vs heartache - and to have it all linked to Aiba-chan... <3

I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much!

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koi_choshi September 21 2016, 01:48:39 UTC
I am just so glad that you enjoyed reading this. It's actually a challenge for me because this story has a lot of "firsts" for me so it really makes me so happy that you're pleased with it. Thank you as well!

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yukitsubute September 9 2016, 05:03:25 UTC

That was sooooo sad and heart-aching but Ioved the mood of it. Aiba is so broken and I totally geel with him. He has toearn to accept himself in first place, then he can start loving someone else.

It's all a big mess, but Ohno is so patient and caring. He waits till Aiba is ready for them, and I am sooo happy that they are in the end. ❤❤❤

Thanks anon-san for this bittersweet story, I really enjoyed it.

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koi_choshi September 21 2016, 02:30:48 UTC
Thank you for reading!

He has to learn to accept himself in first place, then he can start loving someone else. In almost everything that I write, I always wanted to point out this mantra. You really got it. :)

Thanks once again!

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piggywhale September 9 2016, 05:50:01 UTC
Wowww... This is just.. Wowww ( ... )

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koi_choshi September 21 2016, 03:21:56 UTC
I was so overwhelmed when I read this comment. Honestly....! <3 ( ... )

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piggywhale September 22 2016, 10:12:59 UTC
Ah.. when you put it this way, I can see it so much clearer and I am even more convinced now. It is so beautiful thinking of Ohno as representing something more pure and good (hence, Jun represents lust and selfishness? LoL) It is great that Ohno still can express real anger and disappointment, thus making this really interesting. I really love it! Thanks so much again.

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