Gift fic for ohmiya3104

Sep 09, 2016 15:58

A piece of rainbow for ohmiya3104

Title: Baby Boo
Pairing: Sakuraiba; Ohmiya
Rating/Warnings: PG
Summary: Sho is known for many things. But even Sho cannot solve the world’s biggest mystery. Love.
Notes: Thanks to my fabulous beta! And to our amazing mods! Recipient-san, I hope you like it.

Baby Boo )

p: aiba masaki/sakurai sho, year: 2016, r: pg

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ohmiya3104 September 9 2016, 17:33:39 UTC
I like it so far! Thank you! It's so cute and fluffy, just one of my typical stories!
I love how its started! Aiba was so stupid to enter a wrong apartment, and how Sho was angry because he ate his crackers and drank his precious beer. Aiba is really a tennen!
Aren't Jun was trying to get closer to Aiba... But, I loved it when Sho said “Stay away from Masaki, Jun.” *KYAAA* He begins to be the caring boyfriend out of blue, and he really take cares of him when Aiba get sick, how sweet was that ><
But still he was a jerk when he didn't respond to Aiba's confession and he start to ignore it! WTH, at least make it clear you want to think about it. I just wished Nino punched him in the face. And YEAH!! They make it up at the end.
How did Sho didn't know about Ohmiya relationship. Stupid lmao!

That was so good! I really appreciate your hard works for writing this for me.
Thank you very very very much. I really loved it!
I enjoy reading it and I hope you will enjoy reading the fanfiction that was written for you!

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zeon_avalanthe September 21 2016, 02:09:56 UTC
Thank you! I was worried since I didn't write fluff often, so I'm glad that you like it :)

I tried to portray Aiba as someone who is a natural charmer. Sho had wanted to be angry at Aiba, but he can't, just because it's Aiba.

And Jun just love to tease Sho, really. He wanted his friend to be happy.

Well, Sho is a bit dense in the romantic department, so he needs that push for him to finally take action.

Thank you again! It had been a pleasure writing this XD
And yepp, I most certainly enjoyed the fanfic that was written for me :)

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kirasebi September 10 2016, 19:12:55 UTC
It was such a cute story ^^
Sho was really clueless in the beginning and I like that Nino and Ohno give him the push he needed in the end.

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zeon_avalanthe September 21 2016, 02:10:40 UTC
Sho was a little dense, I admit.

Thank you for reading!

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helenmaldon September 10 2016, 23:40:47 UTC
LOL it really genuinely made me laugh that Aiba entered the wrong apartment xD I can completely see that happening...and Sho being confused but also intrigued! This was so cute, thank you!

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zeon_avalanthe September 21 2016, 02:11:32 UTC
Aiba is just an airhead, but he's also a natural charmer, that's why Sho was intrigued!

Thank you for reading!

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nicefinalbeam September 11 2016, 02:22:45 UTC
This is super adorable! I love the premise of Aiba going to the wrong apartment and just making himself at home LOL And I totally identify with Sho loving his scent, it's so nice when a person smells great. I'd want to have that to hug and hold too.

I was happy to see protective Nino being there for his friend, but also glad he gave Sho another chance. I love the happy ending ♥

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zeon_avalanthe September 21 2016, 02:15:43 UTC
Aiba can get comfortable anywhere. It's his charm LOL
I know right? It was just my imagination, but with his personality, that was how I picture Aiba's smell is XD

Nino is snarky, but he means good. He just wants his bff to be happy.

Thank you for reading!

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astrangerenters September 11 2016, 04:29:01 UTC
I love the image of Aiba totally sprawled out and comfortable on Sho's couch, not even realizing he's in the wrong apartment. A cute way for them to meet :)

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zeon_avalanthe September 21 2016, 02:16:58 UTC
Aiba is adorable, that's why :)

Thank you for reading!

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