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Gift fic for yoru_no_hikaru 2/2

Sep 10, 2016 16:10

A piece of rainbow for yoru_no_hikaru Part 2

( Make you feel my love 2/2 )

Comments 8

yoru_no_hikaru September 10 2016, 21:45:53 UTC

Okay, I don't quite know where to begin... or actually, how to appropriately phrase my appreciation. I'll try to wrap things nicely, but I might just babble incoherently. If that should happen, I apologize. But I'll try to convey my thoughts and feelings ( ... )

inaudible_d September 25 2016, 17:23:33 UTC

:D :D

From the first time I read your sign-up, I got instantly attracted to this prompt. Knowing that you liked what I came up with made me so happy ( ... )

lilly0 September 11 2016, 08:31:53 UTC

I love this so much! The tension and the akwardness between these two, and that they can't talk openly at the beginning, and how Sho accidentally heard Jun in that bar. I mean, I took my guess that Jun probably didn't mean it like that, but still... I could understand Sho's reaction. I was really surprised when Jun was invited to the family dinner, and I loved their talk in the bathroom (though I was shocked that Sho really said he believes Jun would make fun of him in front of his family. Guess he just wanted a reaction ^^) - it was so good when the tension resolved and they finally admitted on being a couple. Sho's sister is so nice by the way <3 And I love how the last love-scene between Sho and Jun showed that their whole relationship changed <3

Thanks so much for writing this, anon-san!

inaudible_d September 25 2016, 17:25:51 UTC

Yes! Jun totally didn't mean it like that D: he's not a jerk D: LOL. Ahaha I think Sho just didn't know what to believe after Jun said that about his family. Poor thing didn't know what Jun actually meant with that. xD

I'm glad you loved this! Thank you for reading! :D

astrangerenters September 11 2016, 14:02:43 UTC

Typical Sakumoto with their inability to communicate well, hahaha, but that's the appeal, right?? Getting over their misunderstandings and misfires and coming to realize just how good they could be if they just try for something serious. I like Sho apologizing for being such a jerk and I like the serious conversations they had about the consequences of pursuing a serious relationship. I'm glad things worked out...and boy did they work out well in the end ;)

inaudible_d September 25 2016, 17:26:49 UTC

Classic Sakumoto, I must say ;D And yes they work out really well in the end. ;D thank you for reading! :D

64907 September 12 2016, 08:04:32 UTC

Haha all the nope movie references made me laugh and go, "ONE OF US, ONE OF US!"

I like how the Sho in here felt like the Sho from the arena tour reports, with all the side-eyes and the not-so-subtle references. ;) I also like how the ending is different from the beginning-in the sense that you can feel that they have resolved their issues and now understand each other better. :)b

inaudible_d September 25 2016, 17:32:03 UTC

Ahahaha I love that I can use that movie to start the conflict in this fic. Sho's comment on the arena tour reports are precious and I know I have to incorporate them in this story. I intentionally put the sex part at the beginning and the end to highlight the difference of their relationship aside from the fact that I just want to write them having sex and I'm glad it works. :D

Also thank you for your help on this one! :D