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stormymood in arashi_exchange

Gift fic for lover_youshould

Sep 11, 2016 15:41

A piece of rainbow for lover_youshould

Title: Work In Progress
Pairing: Ohno/Jun, Ohno/ Aiba, Ohno/Jun/Aiba
Rating: R
Summary: It all started when a fashion design student entered an art student’s world.
Notes: I did my best, but I think I could give more than this. I’m really sorry. Hopefully, you still like this. Thanks to mod-san for lots of understanding ( Read more... )

r: nc-17, p: aiba masaki/matsumoto jun/ohno satosh, p: matsumoto jun/ohno satoshi, p: aiba masaki/matsumoto jun, year: 2016

Comments 6

lover_youshould September 12 2016, 05:15:55 UTC

Anon!! I love this so much, and I'll be back soon to leave a better comment! Thank you!!!

lover_youshould September 20 2016, 06:22:53 UTC

OKAY, REAL COMMENT TIME!

First of all: OHNO ASKING JUN TO MODEL FOR HIM. YES GOOD!!!

Also, Jun was just heading out from the room of his last class of the day, looking forward for the moment his back would meet the soft mattress of his bed back in his apartment omg Jun I know that feel!

It would be a whole new different world once you get to know how an artist’s mind works. Jun remembered what his art professor said. I am so excited for Ohno to show Jun ~a whole new world~ :>

Jun getting hard just from Ohno's eyes on him -- YES. TRUE TO LIFE AND ALSO MY HEART, 100%.

And then MAKE-OUTS!! AND MORE!!! Ahhh my Juntoshi heart is singing with happiness~~~

OHNO DOESN'T END UP LIKE THIS WITH ALL HIS MODELS, JUST THE ONES HE REALLY LIKES! Omg omg. "Just the ones with bangs as cute as yours" is what he was really thinking, I'm sure. :>

They had their own circle of peers and people, different interest and hobbies, different personalities, yet somehow they managed to meet halfway through. It felt that they were parts of a puzzle that would ( ... )

inaudible_d September 13 2016, 17:34:44 UTC

Aaah this is good! :D I love the fuzzy feelings this gave me all the while even during the time Jun was confused with his feelings. Thank you for this!

P.S. I think the rating on the header should be NC-17 since there was one sex scene that was actually explicit up there ;D

astrangerenters September 15 2016, 03:54:21 UTC

Any reference to Jun watching AND LIKING Titanic is always a treat! I love the idea of Ohno drawing Jun like one of his French girls ;)

I like Jun's initial insecurity about Ohno and Aiba and how he's able to finally come to terms with how he loves both of them and they're able to have a deeper bond and stronger relationship as three.

phrenk September 20 2016, 08:24:16 UTC

Oh, so sweet! I love the flow of this and how uncertain/inevitable everything feels. It made me so happy when they all got together and Jun figured out where he belonged. Thank you for sharing! ♥

missbb24 October 30 2017, 10:54:59 UTC

I love this it's so sweet :)