I hardly happens that I cry over a fic, but here I did. (I kinda missed the warning in your header... well, yeah, my fault ^^ But I'm kinda glad I did, because it might have stopped me from reading this. It's sad, and crushing and at the same time there is also a lot of healing and comfort in it. But I cried so much that I had a hard time breathing at the end of this ^^ Good job, anon-san, really good job!!!!!
Thank you! I am just reserving a place for my comments. I promise to come back as soon as I have read this.I am lost for words Author-san. How you managed to take my random, jumbled prompts and turn them into something so beautiful I will never know
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Oh my god, this fic left me a crying mess. It's really hard to read about what happen to Masaki but then I can't not continue to read what happen to Jun afterward. Masaki had really a great impact in Jun's life, even when they had broken up but they still continue being friend, they still care and in love with each other. But then it was short-lived (oh god I want to cry again T-T) The way Nino was eased into the story was great and when he became Jun's supported it even greater. He helps Jun to heal and their sweet kiss kinda make their friendships closer without unnecessary drama. And of course Sho ended being with Jun, because it probably meant to be that way. Perhaps Masaki had seen it earlier. Then how they realizing Masaki's dream of that crepe truck was such a good ending. And also thank you for not making Ohno the bad guy Even if this makes me cry so much, and even if I dislike major character death, it's a great story. Thank you writer-san
I knew that I was in for a crying mess when I saw the warnings.
Aiba as Jun's sun and the others as the stars are such great metaphors for this story. I loved how everyone affected Jun's life in a major way, but at the same time it also falls on Aiba. I didn't expect that Aiba would die here, seriously, and it left me wondering what sould happen next. And I thought Jun dying himself will be the end but it's still not. It's really great because I always believe that there should be hope even in that kind of darkness he experienced.
My favorite part were the life scenes flashing in front of Jun's eyes. It's incredible.
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Good job, anon-san, really good job!!!!!
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The way Nino was eased into the story was great and when he became Jun's supported it even greater. He helps Jun to heal and their sweet kiss kinda make their friendships closer without unnecessary drama. And of course Sho ended being with Jun, because it probably meant to be that way. Perhaps Masaki had seen it earlier. Then how they realizing Masaki's dream of that crepe truck was such a good ending. And also thank you for not making Ohno the bad guy
Even if this makes me cry so much, and even if I dislike major character death, it's a great story. Thank you writer-san
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Aiba as Jun's sun and the others as the stars are such great metaphors for this story. I loved how everyone affected Jun's life in a major way, but at the same time it also falls on Aiba. I didn't expect that Aiba would die here, seriously, and it left me wondering what sould happen next. And I thought Jun dying himself will be the end but it's still not. It's really great because I always believe that there should be hope even in that kind of darkness he experienced.
My favorite part were the life scenes flashing in front of Jun's eyes. It's incredible.
Thanks for writing this!
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