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Gift fic for spacewhistler

Sep 12, 2016 17:59

A piece of rainbow for spacewhistler

Title: The Gentleman's Word
Pairing: Sho X Ohno
Rating: PG
Summary: Sho made a life-long promise to Satoshi and he was determined to keep it.
Notes: Dear spacewhistler, although your prompt made me the most excited to write that I've felt in years, I still couldn't come up with anything special or original. Still, I wanted to thank you ( Read more... )

p: ohno satoshi/sakurai sho, year: 2016, r: pg

Comments 6

spacewhistler September 13 2016, 01:42:56 UTC

Hello anon! I actually waited for this fic before I comment on other fics I've read in this exchange and this is so exciting! I'll be giving my detailed reaction to this wonderful fic after work but I just want to thank you in advance. I've read it AND I LOVED IT SO MUCH. <3 <3 <3

I'll be back in a while. :D

HYPED <3 spacewhistler September 14 2016, 12:46:08 UTC

First of all, I would like to say that you have fulfilled my prompt perfectly and for that, I am eternally grateful ( ... )

agustin1982 September 13 2016, 03:35:41 UTC

Yamapair ♥ ♥ ♥
Beautiful Story and so touching, I love this story so much ♥
I am so happy when Satoshi finally realized his mistake and coming back to Sho, aahhhhhh I am so happy for them~~

astrangerenters September 13 2016, 22:24:06 UTC

I like Ohno for his stubbornness. He's a person who is very very very set in his ways. Seeing that attitude of his appear in this story made me wish I didn't like him for being so stubborn. How long the two of them struggled to be together for good, it was so heartbreaking. I was so worried Sho would die but thankfully he didn't. I hope they can finally be together.

negai3104 September 13 2016, 23:00:00 UTC

This story has such gorgeous prose. I think I know who wrote this ;)

I'm glad it ended happy in the end. I was really scared for Sho and for them. Beautiful.

piggywhale September 18 2016, 11:36:34 UTC

Ah.. I am speehless. I mean, really. This is a story of a very unfortunate fact in life - when you love someone way too much, you inevitably turn into a burden. You drive the other away. And when you cannot react well to that, you make everyone's life miserable. There would be no good ending, really. And I cry a heap load for this.

But you are so kind and you make Satoshi comes back, realizing he is most happy being with Sho. I hope it would work for them this time.

This is very beautiful, poignant and sentimental. A perfect piece of angsty Yama. I am so glad I read this. Thank you.