Not Enough

[arashian_ghost]

Genre: Angst
Rating: PG, I guess
Pairing: Toma/Arashi
Disclaimer: Arashi belongs to Arashi. Or to Johnny. But not to me.
A/N: I am writing a g-rated orgy. An angsty g-rated orgy. What has become of me? myjulien, you are a fantastic beta even though you don't think you know how to beta.

They welcomed him with open arms, they always did, but it was always

Comments

[g_esquared]

This is... so great. Okay that is not an adequate word. Would it be lame if I said I have always wanted to read/write toma/arashi like that? This is just beautiful, the way it hit all the right notes. Oh toma, how I love you so. ;___;

[arashian_ghost]

O_O wow, thank you! This was a huge confidence boost for me- it's my first time publishing in a comm and some of my favorite writers come and leave comments? Thank you so much ♥

I was thinking of making this originally a longer thing and I was going to call it "we could have had it all", but somehow it worked better for me shorter and more abstract. Do you think I should write an expansion that's more story-like?

[g_esquared]

you're kidding, you've got nothing to be insecure about. going by how you publish for the first time with something like THIS. i'm still really stuck on the last section. (and re: the other thing - ;____; thank you. i'm going through such writers' block right now, ugh.)

i think this worked brilliantly in the abstract way that you did it! i really enjoyed how well i could imagine the things you spoke of. that's approximately what i meant when i said it hit all the right notes. that said i would not at all be opposed to reading an expansion - with plot and elaboration and all angsty toma loves arashi and vice versa. it would be so good. (i'm bad with longer things, but i do so love reading them. and/or imagining them.)

[thefortysecond]

Ahlahlah I am suck at remembering to reply to comments. I'm at work so I'm not even bothering to reply with my fic account XD

I have been away from ficdom for so much longer than I want to think about... the problem is that (besides for being forgetful) whenever I try to write, things turn into these giant multichaptered MONSTERS before I can even work on a first draft. I've got like 3 semi-started fics on here already (locked because they are embarrasingly bad) XD I got as far as three chapters into one and then decided I hated it! So basically I'm replying to your comment more as a kick in the butt to myself so I go back to writing. Meep. Sorry for spamming your inbox -_-

[astrangerenters]

Oh no, Toma! Perfect angst, short and sweet

[arashian_ghost]

Thank you! ♥ (I told you I would reply eventually ^_^;;;)

[malena_tomoe]

nice... you do an amazing job I just love it!

[arashian_ghost]

Thank you for reading! :D

[boblemon]

Wow... even though it's G-rated and short, I really loved this... I loved the thoughts you came up with about their relationships, and how Toma feels about it. They were so perfect, so complete, they could never have been anything but five.

Sad, but so lovely...

[arashian_ghost]

Yeah... I always wanted to write a line like that, but then it came out in one of my angst stories, and suddenly there's a bitter twist T_T I don't know what came over me! Thanks!

[lianne29]

Oh Toma...

This is sad and sweet

[arashian_ghost]

Thank you! (I'm trying really hard to understand what's going on in your profile picture o_O)