::8:: fic for mangamistrezz - Part 2

Dec 09, 2015 22:42

Title: Correction - Part 2
Word count: 10,653 words
Pairing: Ohba
Genre: Aiba-centric, Non-Au, Drama, Angst
Rating: R
Summary: The signs are always there but Aiba never notices.

[PART TWO]

Their concert tour is about to start. It is that period of the year again when they would be together for pretty much all the time. They will stay in the same hotel, go
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2015, #ohbaexchange

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mangamistrezz December 9 2015, 23:26:16 UTC
Saving this spot for me! Will read and comment later~
(But I do want to say how proud I am that this is the first Ohba fic so far in this exchange XD)

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mangamistrezz December 10 2015, 04:35:54 UTC
I'm back~ (∗ᵒ̶̶̷̀ω˂̶́∗)੭₎₎̊ ( ... )

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piggywhale December 20 2015, 07:25:03 UTC
I am so relieved you like this gift fic. Initially, I wanted to try forbidden-relationship in non-AU. It was meant to be frustrating but did not mean to be so sad. But it eventually turned out pretty heartbreaking. Sorry >_< I was also quite worry when I finished it and realized it's quite melodramatic. I am so glad you still find it enjoyable read.

In fact, I have to thank you for giving me an opportunity to write this. It is my first ever non-AU. I have never done non-AU. I had such a memorable experience attempting this. All the frustration and worry. Also, the joy and fun. Thank you so much <3

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neko_kirin3104 December 9 2015, 23:43:49 UTC
My heart broke everytime Aiba's heart broke throughout this fic. And Ohno's eventual broken state is really devastating ( ... )

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piggywhale December 20 2015, 07:48:25 UTC
Your comment are so beautiful. I think you summed up the theme of this story far better than I ever could myself. We often think people should just talk and resolve uncertain information and conflicts. But talking is in truth very difficult.

Also, I am glad you find the story fitting Ohba pairing. Personally, I think they are the only pair that something this sincere and heartbreaking can happen. With others, it would not spiral down so badly like this.

Thank you so much again for your comments. They really make me very happy and content. Thank you.

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rifnaoei December 13 2015, 07:32:45 UTC
You made me hard to breath and teary eyes from the beginning until the end of the story.
It's so heartbreaking and I lost my words to tell you how beautiful angsty it is.

Thank you for writing~! :)

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piggywhale December 20 2015, 07:56:01 UTC
I am so happy you find the story touching and that you like it. Thank you so much for giving it a try.

And thank you so much for commenting :)

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