Left in Silence

[araya_rose]

Name: Araya

Title: Left in Silence
Fandom: Sailor Moon
Rating: PG

Oh, for so long I’ve tried to shield you from the world

Oh, you couldn’t face the freedom on your own

Here I am left in silence

Your chubby cheeks are alive with mirth as I graze my forefinger across your exposed foot. A delightful squeal escapes your tiny lips and it is infectious. I

Comments

[moon_destiny]

Aww, Pluto. This is so sad. :( And a different look at the theme, but an awesome one. I was kind of confused at the beginning, but then everything clicked into place.

Sailor Pluto is so kickass here, and you've written her so well that her pain is palpable.

[araya_rose]

Thank you so much! I really wanted to write something different for both canon and the prompt. :D I am so glad you liked it,

[fliederfee]

I loved the letter format. And I thought you did a great job in conveying Pluto's character. She comes off as so cold, even in her intense love for her daughter. And I enjoyed the juxtaposition of such disparate emotions. Very appropriate for the soldier from a planet of ice. :) You make me wonder about the situation, and about the things Pluto is not saying.

[araya_rose]

Thank you so much! I suppose it could be an outtake from the Sailor Moon epic that I am working on. :D As a hint, I am an avid Pluto/Endy shipper. haha :D

Thanks so so much for your amazing comment! :D

[araya_rose]

Thanks Loki. :D You know how I love to torture our Setsuna...

haha.. now you've got me thinking sequel! Oh no! :D

Thanks for your beautiful comments as always. <3 *hugs*

[lovelylytton]

I like how despite it being non-canon, it feels as if it could have just happened like this. I do think that there is something between Pluto and Endymion and what with the two of them being all tall, dark and serious, the sure would match. But I also love how unconditional Usagi's love of Chibi-Usa is, even though she is adopted. But then again, the whole jealousy issue between Usagi & Chibi-Usa makes so much sense with your story in mind.

Very very enjoyable, thank you for sharing!

[araya_rose]

I am an avid Setsuna/Mamoru shipper. And too think this whole thing started because I wondered why Chibi-usa and Setsuna had the same colored eyes. :D

I'm so glad you liked it. :D and thank you for your amazing comments! :D You brighten my day!