Comments | araya_rose: Fire Fly

araya_rose

Fire Fly

May 25, 2009 21:10

Title: Fire Fly ( Read more... )

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araya_rose May 26 2009, 06:52:37 UTC

Fixed. Debating about the dodged thing lol. ANd thank you :D!

arabianred May 26 2009, 06:28:27 UTC

I cracked up at "Blondie" and "Double D." Hehehe. Also, I really like how she finds him irresistible as well as the tension between them. I also love how Jadeite picked up on her uncertainty and reassured her. :)

Great job!!

araya_rose May 26 2009, 06:53:06 UTC

Thank you! :D