I feel I'm missing chapters. What chapters I've been able to find jumped from 4a to this one 5c. I don't recall Jaejoong killing the Alpha or elders.
I think you missed a great opportunity to show Hyu regaining his memory and his emotions. You kind of glossed over that all, and I would have loved to have seen it. It's like you glossed over things in this chapter compared to the earlier ones. There's no emotion, it reads like a report. I hope to be able to read his emotions in more depth. ❤️❤️
feel free to check while I'm working on the missing chapters.
I'm thankful that you read this story properly and leave some serious comments because I didn't really think much when I wrote this story. I was thinking about terminating this story since I felt like the story is no longer interesting.
RE: Re: Confusedterivans4October 23 2021, 00:47:18 UTC
Oh, I didn't realize you also posted this on AO3! That should make it so much easier to follow! Live journal makes it difficult to find things it seems.
You are very welcome. I've only joined Live journal to comment on stories I've enjoyed! (I know I was wailing at the start, but that's because you did such a good job of portraying Hyu's emotions - that line of "no, no, I'm not Omega" as well as not wanting to come for the monsters, rapists still ring in head)
As I said before, I really like the main plot. All of us writers sometimes have times where we're not happy with a story or feel discouraged. It's okay to take a break. I feel bad because you might have shown Hyus emotions in some of those missing chapters that I questioned! I'll check out your link and hopefully find them, thank you!
Out of curiosity, why do you find it uninteresting now? Anything in particular?
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I feel I'm missing chapters. What chapters I've been able to find jumped from 4a to this one 5c. I don't recall Jaejoong killing the Alpha or elders.
I think you missed a great opportunity to show Hyu regaining his memory and his emotions. You kind of glossed over that all, and I would have loved to have seen it. It's like you glossed over things in this chapter compared to the earlier ones. There's no emotion, it reads like a report. I hope to be able to read his emotions in more depth. ❤️❤️
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https://archiveofourown.org/works/28785174
feel free to check while I'm working on the missing chapters.
I'm thankful that you read this story properly and leave some serious comments because I didn't really think much when I wrote this story. I was thinking about terminating this story since I felt like the story is no longer interesting.
Thank you for the boost of interest!
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You are very welcome. I've only joined Live journal to comment on stories I've enjoyed! (I know I was wailing at the start, but that's because you did such a good job of portraying Hyu's emotions - that line of "no, no, I'm not Omega" as well as not wanting to come for the monsters, rapists still ring in head)
As I said before, I really like the main plot. All of us writers sometimes have times where we're not happy with a story or feel discouraged. It's okay to take a break. I feel bad because you might have shown Hyus emotions in some of those missing chapters that I questioned! I'll check out your link and hopefully find them, thank you!
Out of curiosity, why do you find it uninteresting now? Anything in particular?
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