Oblivion

[archaen]

By the way, I just found this on my hard drive. Might as well post it, as it's one of the few things I've written that I'm actually proud of. Opinions wanted, criticism will be ignored. Unless it's actually relevant.

OblivionResigned to inevitable apathy

Comments

[serenity777]

Wow, that's really good. Of course, you know me and big words--we don't get along. *grin*

Nice.....not too bleak.....

[lord_wraith]

Hey, I think it's very good......seems like decent meter to me, though I may not be the best to ask about poetry, I do like it. Yet it is a bit dark, but not too dark. Good job man!