[Fic] A Day on Tatooine (1/3?)

[archosauria]

Title : A Day on Tatooine [1/3?]
Characters : Arthur+Alfred, contains Berwald/Tino+Peter later
Rating : G!
Genre : Fluff/Drama/AU
Word count : ~2900
Summary : Star Wars Original Trilogy AU! In which there is a (future) derpy young hero, a (secretly) cranky ex-Jedi and a day in their life together on a dinky moisture farm. Pilot fic for longshot

Comments

[twistedsheets10]

Oh God.

I kinda love you right now. Like. SO MUCh.

Eeee, Little Al, so cute and so clever! ♥

The one that said Arthur was truly happy. Perhaps happy enough to give up the whole universe. Perhaps happy enough that he might have actually did.

Oh, Arthur.

[twistedsheets10]

Also, using Jedi mind tricks on kids, Arthur? Tsk, tsk. XD

[archosauria]

Verse!Arthur misuses the Force SO MUCH it's a wonder the Empire hadn't found him yet. XD Also, he likes cheating. Not exactly a paragon of the light side, he is!

[twistedsheets10]

XD Parents of the world despair they don't have Arthur's power. But with a kid like Al, he needs all the help he can get.

Haha. Hooligan!Jedi!Arthur is the best (until you get him drunk, or supremely angry). ♥

[kasumicc]

♥♥♥ This is pure love. Totally Star Wars universe, so full of details you put here and there so casually, but they really help to the mood! And I love their relationship, and Alfred's way of thinking. If else, I want for the story to continue to see more of this wonderfully built universe!

[archosauria]

Thank you. <3 I do so love dropping setting details into fics, so I am very glad to hear that. Writing this makes me realize how much I've missed Star Wars ever since I stopped reading the EU.

It will continue, at least until the end of the pilot fic. I honestly want to write the longshot as well, since that's where most of the por interesting things happen, but at my writing speed it's got as good a chance of not getting written. We'll see, however.

[celen]

Akdjsjdj Star Wars AU? Oh, I could marry you right this instant. ♥ I can't wait to read more of this. And all the details, meshed with the amazing characterization and ohgod this is brilliant.

[archosauria]

Thank you. <3 I'm glad you like the random tidbits and the characterization---I was a little worried if I'd gone overboard with some of it----but I am now a little more confident that the idea might fly decently enough.

You'll see the next chapter as soon as it's ready, I promise. ^^

[sephydark]

A Star Wars AU? That's amazing. You really did a good job setting up the world and backstory too; it makes me really excited to see more. I can't wait for the rest.

Jedi Master

[sony_mouse]

What a great story, I am so bummed you never continued it :( Maybe one day.