Another Story: Double Meaning.....

[arcpoet]

(I wrote this yesterday and am pleased with it to a certain extent. I think this one definitely needs to be revised and refined, but I'll take any criticism I can get. Again, this piece had double meaning, so my non-Christian friends should be able to enjoy it, but there is deeper meaning to those who do love Jesus

Comments

[kissmylove]

i like it.

[kaycoocachoo]

I actually think this is one of your better works. The emotions that it evokes are so incredible, and it is BEAUTIFUL!!! Love it!!!

[maderasavage]

It is one of his better works. But god, Kire, you are such a hopeless romantic. All of the menfolk are going to find out and disown you. It's alright though... after this, the XX club is sure to adopt you under-wing.

[hcaz]

by XX Club did you mean the Transexual Club? Because I just did a google search on it and that's what I found for all the links. haha. that's pretty messed up if it is. (Messed up but oh so funny)