fic: all about my game

Jun 09, 2012 12:34

title: all about my game
pairing: Zayn/Niall
rating: NC-17
notes: Based on this prompt at the kinkmeme. ~2100 words.
summary: Zayn still thinks that it’s really too fucking hot for this much physical activity, but he finds that he can’t be all that pissed about it when he looks at Niall.

When Zayn had shown up at the park, there’d already been an impromptu football match underway. )

zayn/niall, one direction, fic

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jerkseverywhere June 10 2012, 05:01:32 UTC
oh this is so sweet (and hot)! the build up is so lovely. loved the mention of niall's braces :)

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arcticfoxiest June 10 2012, 22:05:37 UTC
Thanks! :D And it's so easy to forget about Niall's braces, especially in porny scenes when it's more convenient to just not mention them, but I liked including a line about it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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itsjuli June 10 2012, 09:53:40 UTC
This was so adorable and hot at the same time. I actually love their relationship or friendship (whatever) in this fic so much :) Thank you for writing and sharing this ♥ x

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arcticfoxiest June 10 2012, 22:06:48 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Thank YOU for reading and commenting. :D

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thediamondskies June 11 2012, 06:38:15 UTC
ugh god you flawless you. perfect characterization perfect everyone.
turn it into a ziall verse please there is not enough ziall in this fandom.

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arcticfoxiest June 13 2012, 00:06:17 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I agree, there really isn't enough Zayn/Niall in this fandom! And this is definitely not the last time I'll be writing these two together. :)

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arcticfoxiest June 13 2012, 00:04:48 UTC
Haha, I will keep that in mind!

Ahhhh, thank you so much! I just kind of love the idea of an assured Niall and Zayn (or whoever) being unexpectedly nervous? Niall's just like chill, bro, and sticks his hand down their pants. And ugh, I know, right? ALL OF THE STORIES ABOUT FRIENDSHIP AND AWKWARD HANDJOBS AND WANTING TO MAKEOUT REALLY BADLY PLS.

In conclusion: YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY RIGHT. Also, I'm about to be writing some Harry/Zayn/Niall, and I feel like I should be blaming (thanking?) you. HARRUMPH.

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arcticfoxiest June 16 2012, 01:14:24 UTC
I actually briefly entertained the thought of that other person being Bieber earlier today ("I didn't even know Irish people were allowed to say bro, bro."), and then I was appropriately horrified at myself. Y'ALL ARE REALLY TRYIN ME ON TUMBLR. Y'ALL ARE REALLY TRYIN ME.

But I don't understand what you mean by dumbest? Do you actually mean most magnificent because that is all that I am getting from this comment right now. I am BEAMING at the thought of Niall being jealous of a kitten, and calling it Twat, omg. Sweet makeouts, yesss. This brain of yours sounds like a keeper tbh.

So all of a sudden Niall and Zayn are a thing on tour, right, and Harry didn't even know that was a thing that was allowed. Most of the fic will be him staring intensely (read: creepily) at them, and bothering them about the details of their relationship, and basically literally inserting himself between them until they're like, god, okay Harry you can stay. And Styles gets his way! Or something, idk, it seemed like a good idea at the time. ;__;

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dmoskobitch June 14 2012, 03:21:49 UTC
so i think i am in love with you nbd?

also it is so accurate that zayn was the more nervous one and urgh it was just perfect...

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arcticfoxiest June 14 2012, 03:52:16 UTC
Haha, thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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