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ardentintox

One Day Out There (Part the Fourth)

Jul 11, 2011 22:59

Title: One Day Out There
Fandom: Crossover (HoND/Aladdin/Beauty and the Beast)
Prompt: See Part the First.

( In which some characters and the writer make a triumphant return, some things are explained, and some things are left painfully unresolved. )

crossover, kinkmeme, one day out there, hond, disney, het, fanfiction, batb, belle/quasi

Comments 4

avatarelphaba16 July 13 2011, 22:52:21 UTC

Oooohhhhh, things are getting tense! I loved it! Belle and Esme's interactions were probably my favorite part. I totally see them being pals. You rock! XD

ardentintox July 14 2011, 00:32:50 UTC

Eeee, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! *is writing last chapter and listening to the HoND soundtrack and is generally fangirly right now*

planesandcranes July 16 2011, 05:39:47 UTC

oh my gods, i'm so happy i finally got to read this. I'M IN LOVE, I REALLY AM. i love how you wove phoebus/esmeralda into it, and especially belle's backstory. it's perfect. and so heartbreaking. i'm a huge, huge fan of gaston (i'm not sure why either, lol) and seeing him being so terrible makes me feel all floaty! (maybe it's like, i love to hate him?)

anyway, i love how layered this is. you've created a really wonderful and believeable plot. it's complex, but not confusing in the least. you've brought together so many great characters and i love seeing them all work together! is the next chapter the last one? i'm sad, but also so excited! it's going to be magnificent!

ardentintox July 16 2011, 19:59:45 UTC

Have I mentioned that I love your reviews? Because I do. *squees*

The last chapter will be the last one, unless I cut it in half and post each half separately. On the one hand, it would flow better as one chapter. On the other hand, it would have to be a massive, massive chapter. So, to answer your question: maybe, it depends on how long it is.