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ardentintox

One Day Out There (Part the First)

Jun 23, 2011 18:20

Title: One Day Out There
Fandom: Crossover (HoND/Aladdin/Beauty and the Beast)
Prompt: Over at disney_kink , I got a prompt for a Belle/Quasi based on this pic featuring Quasi with Aladdin's lamp. To say it got away from me would be an understatement.

( In which Quasi finds a magic lamp, meets an anachronistic genie, and changes his life forever. )

crossover, kinkmeme, one day out there, hond, disney, het, fanfiction, batb, belle/quasi

Comments 4

planesandcranes June 23 2011, 23:50:14 UTC

really? no rippling pectorals? :p (yes, i'm totally working on your hercules prompt.)

i love this. quasimodo is absolutely adorable, and genie sounds just like him. i'm so excited to see where this goes! keep up the great work!

ardentintox June 24 2011, 02:53:06 UTC

Thank you! I always worry about getting voices right - I'm glad they're in character.

And thank you for filling my prompt! :)

atmosana99 June 24 2011, 06:52:45 UTC

Pfft! This is an absolutely *delightful* read so far - you've got the character's voices down PAT, like 'could-hear-them-talking-in-my-head pat xB Aww, Quasi is such a modest and considerate sweetheart, while Genie's just so perfectly *Genie* xD
Your writing is fluid, colourful, and well paced as well. I would LOVE to see where this goes! c:

ardentintox June 24 2011, 20:29:30 UTC

Thank you! Thank you SO MUCH! So much praise. *blush* I'm so glad you like it!