Swinging with the old stars

Feb 03, 2012 08:41

Title: Swinging with the old stars
Author: ardvari
Rating: PG
Pairing: Sam/Jack
Disclaimer: Not mine.
A/N: Set after Moebius, Jack and General Hammond meet in Washington. Dusty bar, whiskey, heart-to-hearts.

Swinging with the old stars )

stories: stargate

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sjhw_tolerance February 3 2012, 12:36:17 UTC
Love it! A very real look into these two men.

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ardvari February 5 2012, 09:10:56 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked! :)

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supplyship February 3 2012, 17:09:06 UTC
This is fabulous. You tread that line between CO and friend really well, and even if Jack doesn't feel 100 percent comfortable, there's the sense of surety and rightness and friendship all through this.

And oh my heart, We needed her more than you did. I just don't even know what to say because they did, *Earth* did...but Jack, oh Jack! *flails*

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ardvari February 5 2012, 09:13:22 UTC
I know! Jack... *sigh* And Sam, really. *sigh* I don't even, I CAN'T! Heartbreak and tragedy... But really, out of all the fandoms I've written for (like, three) these two are the most fun to write because they're just so... heart string-tearing in a sobbingly pleasant way.

Thanks for reading and leaving a comment! :)

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draco_somnians February 3 2012, 22:12:36 UTC
Oh this is wonderful! I'm such a sucker for this kind of Jack & Hammond fic (Hammond! <3) and you've hit all my happy buttons with this.

"“We needed her more than you did,” he says and his voice is both hard and full of regret." *wibbles* There is so much just in that line.

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ardvari February 5 2012, 09:14:57 UTC
Ha, I'm glad I hit all your happy buttons. Yay!

That one line I actually carried around with me for a week and a half while I was on vacation and then ended up building the story around it. I'm glad it worked out for everyone, I quite liked it.

Thanks for reading!

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sharp2799 February 3 2012, 23:53:29 UTC
Oooh. Well, I'm glad Hammond agrees that it's Jack's turn with Sam now!

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ardvari February 5 2012, 09:16:34 UTC
Me, too! Probably makes him feel better to know that Jack's not gonna be standing up there alone to weather the politics.

Thanks for reading!

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anna_sg1 February 4 2012, 00:01:12 UTC
Oh wow... just... ALL THE FEELINGS! :')

Very in character, very them. It wasn't hard to imagine this coversation actually happening. :D

“We needed her more than you did,”

This just killed me. Such a perfect line. And Jack's response breaks your heart but then it's ok because they're srvived and they're together now. ♥

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ardvari February 5 2012, 09:18:36 UTC
I sighed so very much while writing this, I probably sounded like the saddest panda in the universe. It's just the tragedy of these two that makes them so damn perfect. *sigh*

Anyways, glad you liked it, and thanks for commenting!

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