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are_sensei

Power Play - A RenIchi Oneshot

May 07, 2011 00:49

Wow, holy crap. I found this in my documents. I had started it a couple years ago, and I had completely forgotten about it until now. So I finished it! And I am posting it here for all your enjoyment. I think I did an okay job with this one XD

( When did I become the little devil on your shoulder? )

renichi renji ichigo power smut angst

Comments 10

writerx75 May 7 2011, 16:32:25 UTC

This? This is pure fucking genius, my friend. You pulled me in from the first words, really, and the way you described Ichigo's need and worry and Renji's desire to live up to being the one that Ichigo could come to...it all just hit me in the gut. And the way you wrote how the two of them were when they came together was just searing. So delicious, and so beautiful. I'm totally happy that you found this again. :D

are_sensei May 7 2011, 17:36:27 UTC

Haha, I'm glad I found it too, especially if you enjoyed it this much. Thank you ^.^

maru_d_kusanagi May 7 2011, 21:32:12 UTC

Oh my good, this is so great!!!! So sweet and so strong!!!! They are perfectly in character and the end it make water my eyes, it was so good!
Sometimes, I start to wander and dream about a bishounen version of Bleach, how would it be in that type of shoujo manga. And you know what? This is one of those wanders, if Ichigo needed to let go one time, it would be like this.
Thank you dear, this is so perfect ^^

are_sensei May 8 2011, 06:11:14 UTC

*blush* Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it so much. Perfect? Haha, I wish, but thank you ^.^

A shoujo bleach? That would be... odd. I think...

starbearertm May 8 2011, 00:35:03 UTC

Beautiful job! I love the second person POV as well as the thoughts revealed. Very sensual and steamy. Lots of good emotions put into this.

are_sensei May 8 2011, 06:09:41 UTC

Thank you, I had a lot of fun getting into Renji's head in this one. I imagine him very earnestly narrating this whole thing.

metallic_efekt May 9 2011, 17:37:34 UTC

This was awsome! I really liked it when Ichigo came to Renji for help; it's just so...I don't know...nice. I really like angsty fics for some reason.

are_sensei May 10 2011, 03:24:47 UTC

Haha, a little angst can be fun now and again. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

azur_dreams May 13 2011, 07:21:33 UTC

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!
that is so great
i super-love it
really really touched my heart! :)
<3

are_sensei May 15 2011, 05:15:52 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.