Comments | areidra: Poetry is fun! and Jon's Camaro is pretty!

areidra

Poetry is fun! and Jon's Camaro is pretty!

Jun 11, 2005 21:53

Ok, this is your warning now! i will have a poem at the end of this....or maybe i'll just make it an lj cut! i'll probably do that! but yea!

i called in to the library today cuz my family and i went to Meeker Days in Puyallup today! it was great fun! i got this really cool ear clip thing! it's really awesome! and then we were there for a while! oh ( Read more... )

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hmm k_r_gilmore June 12 2005, 05:32:21 UTC

i'd offer critique, but some writings are just for the writer's enjoyment.

glad i make you smile :)

Re: hmm areidra June 12 2005, 05:37:45 UTC

yes it is mainly just for me! but if you'd like to offer critique i'd be receptive! (and i figured you would offer critique! lol!)

Re: hmm k_r_gilmore June 12 2005, 05:47:33 UTC

well, for critique, i'd just warn you to avoid repetition of this quantity, and expand your vocabulary.

Re: hmm areidra June 12 2005, 05:50:51 UTC

i wanted to do keep it simple....and the repetition was to make a point (in a way)....

saraked0rkian June 12 2005, 19:40:41 UTC

EY we watched the boogeyman. or at least i saw five min and fell asleep. ;P

im glad you had fun though, yay

nice little poem :)

areidra June 12 2005, 19:42:47 UTC

lol! thanx honey! and i fell asleep during the Boogeyman too! lol! i was so tired! i started it at like 11 or 11:30 and then fell asleep about 30 minutes later! lol!