Comments | ares132006: Rosebud: The Big Bad Wolf

ares132006

Rosebud: The Big Bad Wolf

Feb 19, 2012 20:56

It's time I wrote a rosebud. Fortunately scribesdshas put up new ones and I've chosen one.
Tell me what you think.
Ta. :)

( The Big Bad Wolf )

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Comments 12

landrews February 19 2012, 13:31:08 UTC

LOLOL- Nice one, Ares! :hugsyou:

ares132006 February 20 2012, 04:30:43 UTC

*grins* Thanks. I had fun writing it.

*hugs you tight*

leni_ba February 19 2012, 17:40:02 UTC

*grins* Love the end, when Angel is all growly and protective. Yum!

There, she would make like a damsel, and take out the thing that would attack her. - Heh! Gotta love Buffy. :D

ares132006 February 20 2012, 04:31:48 UTC

And we all know how much Buffy doesn't consider herself a damsel in distress. *g*

Glad you liked.

Thank you

Ares

dralf_burns February 19 2012, 19:49:18 UTC

Excellent drabble. I love the build-up to the end with Buffy being fully aware of her stalker and then putting on the damsel act to lure it out.

And protective Angel, always a pleasure to see that side of him.

ares132006 February 20 2012, 04:35:51 UTC

Buffy makes out she is easy prey. And why not? She has that Petite, blonde thing going on. :) A good disguise for a slayer.

Thank you for your thoughts.

Ares

zuriel February 20 2012, 00:50:12 UTC

Ah,what an adorable Rosebud, Ares.

Wonderful B/A rendition of an old favorite!

Somehow I knew Angel would show up at the end, even though Buffy had the situation well under control. :)

*cheers*

ares132006 February 20 2012, 04:37:55 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you picked that up. I had Buffy as Little Red Riding Hood carrying a basket of goodies to her grandma's house in the woods. Only it wasn't the Big Bad Wolf that was the threat to her.

*grin*

Ares

librarian2003 February 20 2012, 10:40:39 UTC

Well now... Wasn't Angel so wrong when he told Buffy that 'this isn't some fairy tale'?

:~))))

Lovely little rosebud, my dear. I thoroughly enjoyed that.

Jo

ares132006 February 20 2012, 11:00:32 UTC

I just noticed something that needed fixing. It must be your presence, my dear. :)

I wanted this to be the Buffy version of the fairy tale Little Red Riding Hood.

There's the little girl, with her basket, walking through the shadows, and even a wood, in the end. And because it is Buffy, who never does ordinary, the Big Bad Wolf is her boyfriend, not the fiend who is after her. :)

I really enjoyed writing this. Sometimes, prompts just ring a bell.

Thank you for your thoughts.

Glad you liked.

*hugs*

Ares