New fic - Cat and Mouse

Jun 16, 2012 20:07

Writer's Toybox is running another challenge. This one is all about Games. Anything goes. So I came up with a rosebud-sized tale.

It's called Cat and Mouse. Can you guess what happens?

It would be nice to hear your thoughts on it.

Ares

Cat and Mouse )

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landrews June 16 2012, 13:33:01 UTC
Hee! You've gone all dark on us!!! I like it!!Thanks for a great start to my morning :-)

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ares132006 June 17 2012, 06:58:26 UTC
I do like dark. :) I'm glad I made your morning.

*hugsyou*

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perpetual June 16 2012, 15:13:32 UTC
Nice! At first I wondered how it was going to be a B/A story, but I loved the way the two segments tied together. Go hunters!

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ares132006 June 17 2012, 06:59:04 UTC
Thank you. I'm glad you picked up the way I tied the two segments together.

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scribesds June 16 2012, 19:42:46 UTC
Like Kairos I was wondering how you were going to turn this into a B/A story. I wonder if Angel misses his old way of hunting? Here he has Buffy by his side and that must count for something, but I do wonder if he might play a little when he’s on his own. What do you think?

Loved this story, Ares! Thank you for being our first entry for the Ganes challenge!

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ares132006 June 17 2012, 07:01:35 UTC
You did say we could use Angelus so I was cheeky and included all three in my story. *g*

I think Angel has it in him to 'play' for sure. It's canon that he has used torture and menace to get information out of the bad guys.

It was a pleasure to write this story. It practically wrote itself.

Edited because I forgot to say thank you. :)

Ares

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zuriel June 19 2012, 02:09:17 UTC
Mmm...dark is good. :) I liked the way you spliced the two sections together. Nice work, Ares!

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ares132006 June 19 2012, 06:52:16 UTC
I am pleased with the result.

Thank you for your thoughts.

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ares132006 December 23 2012, 04:59:16 UTC
Thank you for stopping by and leaving feedback. I do love to hear what people think of my work - whether it needs improvement or not.

My work is done if you think the tale is creepy.

Thank you again

Ares

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