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[aresrising05]

All eyes were on the mega-screen, Marshall Umbe’s unforgettable face twelve meters high. The left side of his face was expressive enough to show his grim determination

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[sinnamongirl]

Reminded me a little bit of Starship Troopers, just a tad, and that is a very good thing. Good job!

[roina_arwen]

That's what I thought too!

[aresrising05]

It was meant to be a mix of starship troopers and final fantasy

[eternal_ot]

Interesting start..hope there is more..

P.S :- Your text is aligned all left with no paragraphs/ spacing which makes it difficult to read on a (my) computer.

[aresrising05]

Yeah, I'll be more careful with my formatting

[swirlsofblue]

Love the concept you've portrayed here :)

[mamas_minion]

Would be interested in finding out more about Shard and the phantoms and how things unfolded on this world.

[rayaso]

Well done! I agree, this would also make a good start to a longer story. I would love to know how this turns out.

[aresrising05]

Thank you