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ari_g

Fic: Crossroads 1/?

Oct 13, 2010 15:07

Title: Crossroads

Summary: rewriting Doomsday and season 9 into a more coherent storyline. Or at least trying to… Comments are very much welcomed.

Beta: the_bluesuede (thank you! you're awesome!)

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crossroads, chlollie, fic, chloe/davis

Comments 9

joyblue October 13 2010, 23:06:39 UTC

you got me with this fic!
This will totally rock! Can't wait for more!
Brilliant idea!

ari_g October 13 2010, 23:58:57 UTC

thank you!

the_bluesuede October 14 2010, 01:43:22 UTC

haha rereading I think I'm not as awesome as we both thought. I accidentally missed a couple things. Serves me right for not re-reading before I mailed them off. lol

But either way, I enjoyed reading it (again). Can't wait to see more from you!

ari_g October 19 2010, 23:00:15 UTC

lol it's alright ;) I'm writing chapter III right now. The funny thing is that I have one later chapter already written and scenes for futures ones resolved, but I still need to write how the story gets to that point... I'll probably be sending you the next one to beta next week or so :)

slytherinpunk October 14 2010, 13:32:58 UTC

The last part has me confused, but the first part (even though there appears to be slight Chavis)with Chloe and Oliver has me intrigued, and wondering where Oliver's feelings border on.

I hope you update soon.

ari_g October 19 2010, 23:11:34 UTC

thanks! yep there was Chlavis, but don't worry this story is Chlollie FTW. The last part deals with Zod (being played by Sam Wither in my head, I love Callum but having SW play Zod brings so many interesting possibilities in my head. I just couldn't resist)and me trying to include Checkmate from the beginning...

brittany2922 October 21 2010, 02:15:27 UTC

Oooh great start I don't know how I missed this when you first posted it but I'm glad I found it! I'm off to read the next part! :)

vagrantdream November 8 2010, 04:33:46 UTC

IT has Chlavis, at least for a little while. I am totally following this. <3 I like how you do let Chloe have feelings for Davis as mixed up as they are- and an epic moment before everything presumably goes to hell. I love them in all forms, tragic too.

And the SW! Zod? AMAZING stuff. I wanted that so bad.

ari_g November 8 2010, 04:41:55 UTC

thanks! me too! SW as Zod would have been amazing ;) I so wanted that to happen on the show... oh well, that's why we have fanfics, eh? :D