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due South: No Cocoon

Mar 28, 2009 22:35

Fandom: due South
Rating: PG
Word count: 2664
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Summary: When he awoke on the outskirts of Chicago, he felt raw all over and Ray was holding his hand.

No Cocoon

year: 2009, pairing: fraser/kowalski, fandom: due south

Comments 34

bakaknight March 29 2009, 03:21:40 UTC

Oh, boys.

You've nailed them. And the lying thing! Oh wow. And I think my favourite part is the one with all the women, and how he just draws back and away and into himself like that.
Well, it's either that, or the ducks/turtles thing. :P

(When I saw it, your cut tag said 'becchio', I assume that to be a spelling mistake...)

ariastar March 29 2009, 13:36:37 UTC

Thank you! <3 (And thank you also re: the cut tag -- that is what I get for trying to type things late at night while ill. Hopefully that was the only typo. XD)

sam80853 March 29 2009, 03:43:54 UTC

::smiles::

Oh, Fraser ... ::sighs::, all those bad things he had to go through to finally find Ray.

\o/

polaris_starz March 29 2009, 03:51:14 UTC

Awww, Fraser. This is wonderful. I'm very jealous that you can write like this when you're as sick as you are. (Get better soon! ♥)

ariastar March 29 2009, 13:35:30 UTC

:DDD

Considering that this is the first Fraser POV thing I've finished or got anywhere close to finishing, I am beginning to suspect that maybe I have to be feeling feverish? Because then I don't censor long words or something. Who knows! XD

skipthedemon March 29 2009, 03:55:45 UTC

Oh, beautiful.

Feel better!

keerawa March 29 2009, 04:02:30 UTC

That's lovely. Excellent Fraser voice, and I re-read this bit 4 times: She vanished and he lit his candles, counting as he went; one, two, eight, twenty-three, sixty, one-hundred-ninety-two, warm stumps of wax guttering against the windowsill. The warmth in Benton was a banked fire, trembling ashes waiting for kindling, and he knew he had found the wrong word. Need, perhaps. How terrible.