due South: No Cocoon

Mar 28, 2009 22:35

Fandom: due South
Rating: PG
Word count: 2664
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Summary: When he awoke on the outskirts of Chicago, he felt raw all over and Ray was holding his hand.

No Cocoon

year: 2009, pairing: fraser/kowalski, fandom: due south

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wihluta March 29 2009, 10:22:25 UTC
Oh, this made me all flaily with joy!

I think you've caught them really well, here.

This Ray Vecchio behaved, perhaps, as one might after studying the physical habits of the Vecchio clan and extrapolating.
And this was like a "Duh!" moment for me because, yes, Ray's behaviour could be read that way. Never occurred to me before. Great observation!

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akite March 29 2009, 12:08:13 UTC
Oh, that's really lovely. The whole Victoria section made me ache for Fraser. Your voices for both Fraser and RayK are spot on.

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grey853 March 29 2009, 12:29:44 UTC
Poor Fraser, so touch starved and in need of someone like RayK. I liked it very much.

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galenlisle March 29 2009, 16:38:21 UTC
I enjoyed this very much! I especially like the pre-Chicago reflections.

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love_jackianto March 29 2009, 19:44:22 UTC
Wonderful job, you really captured Fraser's voice. Loved that the cups had ducks and turtles on them. I have the perfect icon for this story.

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