its a start

[aristotleblack]

hmm last night was wierd i thought of some realy great words/lines for a great little poem but i wasnt sure how it would turn out...tell me what you think

Comments

[robolean]

Dude, I don' even usually like dark poetry like that, but that is awesome. Good job.

[aristotleblack]

it wasnt really meant to be dark. but i guess you could put it thatway
thanks