Gratuitous Smut...

[arithion]

Well you see… I was writing chapter four of smile… and bouncing it off moffit, and we got this idea, which of course couldn’t be used for smile. So now it’s a deviation off smile called Make me scream… of course listening to Oshitari singing Crafty with that liquid sex voice of his... didnt help...

Title: Make me Scream…
Author: Arithion
Rating: R-NC17

Comments

[chinawolf]

GAH I just wrote a review for this and LJ ate it. *sporks* The short form:

I like it, muchly, and most especially the feeling of non-perfect first time sex. Realism is good! And you capture that rather well, I think.

Thanks, as ever, for writing and sharing. <3

[measuringlife]

Mmm, gratutious smut =9 VERY hot, I've been dying for some good TezuFuji smut lately, so this filled an ahem "aching need" *laughs* 8D

Love that you made it more realistic, and [gasp] painful. :D

[reddwarfer]

Yeah, this was bloody hot.

*drools*