Fic update...

Mar 29, 2004 01:10

Well, here we go… another Smile update heh… I have no idea why the idea for this chapter jumped me whilst listening to Atobe Keigo sing Cross with you… but it did.

Title: Smile: Show Me
Author: Arithion
Rating: G
Genre: Angstish, bit of drama… um… yeah
Pairing: None really, heavy Fuji/Tez friendship… imply all you want though…
Chapter: Five…
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yuki_scorpio March 28 2004, 15:49:57 UTC
I love you I love you I love you...

I think I said last time I wanted them to get together, but at the same time I hope things between them would stay as they are now...

But I think now the yaoi fangirl in me is screaming *L*

Next part! Next part!

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arithion March 28 2004, 16:06:36 UTC
and I hate to be horrible ... but the yaoi fangirl is going to keep screaming /snicker

Their friendship is just going to keep getting stronger and stronger... there doesn't need to be physically sexual between them for me to create obvious attraction and tension *grins evilly*

I guess my aim for them, is something more akin to soul mates... where the physical is just another aspect but not necessary...Though I do think you'll like the end... in the long and distant future *looks at episode 9 with a groan*

Though I will give in and write one shot off shoots when the bunnies strike me... promise

Thanks for liking it!

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yuki_scorpio March 28 2004, 17:25:09 UTC
Yay to platonic Fuji and Tezuka too!

(and of course Yay to any one shot offshoots XD)

Anything I can do to bribe you to write ZukaFuji? XD

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arithion March 28 2004, 22:25:39 UTC
Anything I can do to bribe you to write ZukaFuji? XD
Give me plot bunnies *sigh* I have a stash of them, but am trying to prioritise ...ie: write my multi's and not give into the thousand one shot idea's
But if one really grips me... I'll write it lol

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moffit March 28 2004, 22:56:03 UTC
I'd have never thought of the cacti analogy. *claps* And that bleeding comment - just the right touch of Sadist!Fuji. lol

It's going to be interesting seeing how you have Fuji, Tezuka and Eiji interact with each other. Will Eiji be more reserved when Tezuka is there? (Wonder if he interrupted anything? XD) I can see him and Fuji easily annoying Tezuka if they get off-topic from studying. Between Tezuka and Fuji though, I think Eiji will *have* do to well on the test.

ehehehe... and you have finger-sucking in this chapter! XD XD XD *plot bunny*

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arithion March 28 2004, 23:11:31 UTC
yeah well... the analogy jumped me in the shower... wasn't much I could do about it.

hehe... yeah... the study session is going to be fun!

*groan* I hate your plot bunies nowI have this in my head
Fuji: Oh look at that, you pricked yourself, how careless. Let me take care of that *raises Tezuka's finger to his mouth and starts to suck gently*
Tezuka: *blink blink*

augh! great....

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earethiel March 29 2004, 06:20:57 UTC
you have officially made my day by providing the sixth installment already ^_^ (am impressed by the speed and quality, as they seldom run hand in hand)

(referring to) the cacti analogy... 0_0 mannn...are you sure you're not the descendant of Aristotle or something? i'll give ya a standing ovation for it, well-thought of and written, too.

and i like this installment better than the last one. sorry if comparison irks you ^^;; but you pushed the friendship further by adding a conflict by the name of 'Eiji' and it made the plot more interesting cuz there's gonna be a big progress whether for good or bad. and oh, argument is good. always good, esp when it involves two complex and intelligent characters like Tezuka and Fuji. and esp when it is well-written ^_^

p/s: i hope you don't mind me adding your name up in my friend's list, ne?

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arithion March 29 2004, 07:09:25 UTC
sixth *blinks* um... but I'm working on that part atm...fifth fifth... you confuseded me! But yeah... I guess the off shoot got confusing lol... it DIDN'T happen in smile... it was just my inner fangirl taking over and writing a one shot *grins*

are you sure you're not the descendant of Aristotle or something*blush ( ... )

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earethiel March 29 2004, 09:42:24 UTC
*blinks* ahh...gomen ne...you'll have to forgive me on that...see, i'm born number-intolerant, y'know, and disability to recognize chapter numbers is one of the symptoms ^^;; *nervous laugh*

it sure as hell helps me write faster if other people like what I write lol

ahh, but thank you too for diligently writing fics and replying to each review, cuz to quote you (somehow) it sure helps a fast review if the author responds to the previous ones... *lol*

thanks for adding me back ^_^ *is happy* don't worry i won't mind the randomness nor rants whatsoever; after all it's your lj so you can bloody say anything you wanna

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arithion March 29 2004, 12:25:33 UTC
hehe diligently gah... I keep gettnig new plot bunnies... I think Sengoku and Atobe are going to kill me if I don't give their stories some attention soon... But I do try!

*hugs* thank you for being willing to put up with randomness! There'll be a lot of it!

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lethanon April 17 2004, 23:52:44 UTC
People in glass houses shouldn’t throw stones.”

that is possibly my fav line in any fic you have ever written. hieno.

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arithion May 4 2004, 21:00:34 UTC
/snicker yeah I love that line *huggles*

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fic_faery May 3 2004, 06:46:00 UTC
Oh the cactus idea worked so well for what Fuji was trying to get across to Tezuka. And I l ike how he misunderstands things on purpose sometimes. Especially when it's to show his more evil side, I like to see things bleed, too fun!

They do have a complicated friendship don't they? One second they are finally reaching each other and the next they are bickering little boys with really sharp tongues.

I must go read the next chapter now and see if poor Eiji is oblivious to it all.

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arithion May 4 2004, 21:01:21 UTC
so glad you still like it!

And he is a little, but yeah well *hugs*!!!

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